Cocoa Beach - vacation song

[jwnicholson78]

This year we went to Cocoa Beach in Florida for a week.  Hell of a long road trip... I wrote this in the wee hours of the early morning when the only other things awake were the biting gnats.  This was written and recorded entirely on my tablet with FL Studio Mobile.  No ukuleles were harmed in the making of this song...

Feedback on what to improve is always appreciated!

jeff

 

 

Edited August 2, 2024 by jwnicholson78

[Wookiee]

Feels like driving music, sounds OK here

[jack c.]

well done.jack c

[Old Joad]

Cool a tourist song, thanks for sharing?

BTW I left my comments on your YOUTUBE channel.

[jwnicholson78]

On 7/26/2024 at 8:22 AM, Wookiee said:

Feels like driving music, sounds OK here

Thanks, Wookie!

[jwnicholson78]

On 7/26/2024 at 9:44 AM, jack c. said:

well done.jack c

Thanks, jack!

[jwnicholson78]

On 7/26/2024 at 3:58 PM, Old Joad said:

Cool a tourist song, thanks for sharing?

BTW I left my comments on your YOUTUBE channel.

Thanks, appreciate the listen and comments.

[Bajan Blue]

Hi

I like this, as Wookie said, driving music

Cool

Nigel

 

[bjornpdx]

Hi Jeff,  I'm impressed you were able to write a song while traveling and it sounds pretty good too. Very nice.
-Bjorn

[jwnicholson78]

On 8/3/2024 at 6:13 AM, Bajan Blue said:

Hi

I like this, as Wookie said, driving music

Cool

Nigel

 

Thanks Nigel,  I really appreciate it.

jeff

[jwnicholson78]

On 8/4/2024 at 2:10 AM, bjornpdx said:

Hi Jeff,  I'm impressed you were able to write a song while traveling and it sounds pretty good too. Very nice.
-Bjorn

Thanks Bjorn,

When we go on summer vacation, I like to use the early morning hours to write a song, with the goal of finishing it before we go home.  I find the deadline focuses my attention.  No time for second guessing

jeff