bjornpdx Posted June 3 Share Posted June 3 Mesmerized Kind of minimalist so best if listened to just before bedtime. Like other songs I've written this one uses an arpeggiated bell sound with a bit of delay. Don't know why but it's really trippy, at least it seems that way to me. I mostly like the way it came out but seems like it needs something more? Thanks for listening/commenting. -Bjorn 5 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Larry T. Posted June 3 Share Posted June 3 Excellent work. Mix sounds great. I'd add a fretless electric bass for some bottom end/pad. It could also add another melody/melodies that play off the others. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jwnicholson78 Posted June 4 Share Posted June 4 I love the sounds of the bells and the chords that you chose. I agree it does seem to need a little more, perhaps on the low end as Larry suggested. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jack c. Posted June 4 Share Posted June 4 wonderful.jack c 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
steve@baselines.com Posted June 4 Share Posted June 4 You are right about the bell sound - I like it. As I was listening I thought of what the 'something more' might be. Of course being a bass player I think it would benefit from some simple bass with an accompanying kick drum on each note for emphasis. Not much, just downbeats and slides here and there. I think it is the Pink Floyd vibe I am hearing, so that leads into the next suggestion, which is talking voice in places in the background with dream induced phrases. It's a nice piece though, very relaxing. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jesse Screed Posted June 7 Share Posted June 7 as always celestial cool you coax some awesome visuals out of my imagination with your music 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bjornpdx Posted June 8 Author Share Posted June 8 Larry T and Jeff thanks for the comment and suggestion. Good point about adding some bottom end which I'm playing around with right now. Thanks Jack Steve I really like the "dream induced phrases" suggestion. Got some ideas on that. Jesse thanks I appreciate the comment. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bajan Blue Posted June 8 Share Posted June 8 Hi Bjorn Really liked this one - reminded me of Tangerine Dream, a very very good thing in my book! Cool Nigel Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Makke Posted June 12 Share Posted June 12 Beautyful tune and ambiance. I liked the soundscape. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wookiee Posted June 13 Share Posted June 13 On 6/3/2024 at 5:10 AM, bjornpdx said: this one uses an arpeggiated bell sound with a bit of delay. Nicely done too. Soporifically relaxing in a very plesant way, ?? ?? ?? . Nice mix, good definition. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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