New song Mr.Star

[The DuoBros]

Hello guys, I was away for a while. I hope you are all well.

In the meantime a new song has been made.

Genre is progressive rock.

This is my original song.

The song is called "Mr. Star".

Here is link: https://youtu.be/-ETw9aISy6A

Lyrics translate to english: 

Mr.Star

In our city a regular guest in a café
He arrives early in the morning and leaves late.
He drinks his cognac like he's the last one.
And the stories he tells are bothering to make your head hurt.

That man's been through a lot, old man
He even played the drum but no one cares.
He loved music, he'd give anything for it.
But especially the classics and Frederick Chopina.

Allright.

Mr.Star

When he leaves his place in the café
Who knows how and where his days and nights go.
No one knows where he lives he says nothing
It just goes and comes it's a mystery.
And one day there's no trace of him
People are talking some rumors.
He buy a one-way ticket
He took his things and good luck to him.

Edited February 28 by The DuoBros
new version of the song

[jack c.]

good job.i would call this plain ole rock and roll.some of the singing is a bit off pitch.jack c

[The DuoBros]

3 hours ago, jack c. said:

good job.i would call this plain ole rock and roll.some of the singing is a bit off pitch.jack c

Thank you, I'll take note of the vocals.

[Old Joad]

This is real cool, you did great job with this song.??

[The DuoBros]

On 2/19/2024 at 10:07 PM, Old Joad said:

This is real cool, you did great job with this song.??

Thank you, here is new version i remixed the song.

[jack c.]

real nice tones.well done.jack c