"Overcorrection at the Interstate" - looking for feedback/critique

[paradisoPDE]

Hi there,

We're a trio and we've done a bunch of music. Recorded ourselves and mixed in Cakewalk, mastered on bandlab.

We're interested in feedback/critique.  All aspects - arrangement, instruments, vocals, tempo etc. - anything you can think of

This is the first song

[jack c.]

drums need to be tighter and voice is pitchy in spots.jack c

[SUPAREELS]

? Takes me back ........... thanks

Steve

[John Vere]

Hmm. I really hate to critique Its just kind got everything wrong! 
Recording is muffled. It’s like there’s one mike on the drums next to a low rack Tom. Vocals very out of pitch. Timing seems lurched.  
Id say  get some help with the recording and production.  

Edited February 1, 2024 by John Vere

[Old Joad]

I love the punk vibe, If you brought the drums more into focus so it sounded like a kit, This song would be killer.?

[Bajan Blue]

Hi 

The song is good, but as John said, there are quite a few bits you could improve on - I think the timing and the vocals do need work

But still enjoyed it!

Nigel