There

[Glenn Stanton]

updated with completed vocals and a better mix (hopefully ? )

98BPM
G Major

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lyrics
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wanna see the sunrise over your shoulder
feel the breeze through your hair
taste you all over
then you ask me where

there
baby

wanna travel the world all over
from here to the chalk cliffs of Dover
from funky Memphis to sunny LA
you hold the globe and show me the way

there
baby

we want to plant seeds in fields of gold
we want to harvest what we have sown
there's just one thing i want you to know 
take me
oh take me
yeah take me
so take me

there

[solo]

wanna see the sunrise over your shoulder
feel the breeze through your hair
taste you all over
then you ask me where

there
baby

take me
there
 

Edited November 20, 2023 by Glenn Stanton

[Teegarden]

Love the song. Could automatically imagine an extra major seven vocal on the chorus.

When finishing the mix I would try to get rid of the a bit a weird pumping effect (too much gate?) with sounds falling away at moments which makes it a bit exhausting to listen to, and create a bit more distance/depth between the instruments.  

Otherwise very nice!

[Glenn Stanton]

On 11/18/2023 at 4:52 PM, Teegarden said:

When finishing the mix I would try to get rid of the a bit a weird pumping effect (too much gate?) with sounds falling away at moments which makes it a bit exhausting to listen to, and create a bit more distance/depth between the instruments.  

actually - there are no gates or even much compression - a bit on the 2-track. it's because of the arrangement kinds of forming a "wave" rolling action - partly because i had too much bass (i was mixing on my cube) and it made the effect very pronounced. but otherwise no compression or effects on individual instruments (only 5). some EQ on a couple of them, some delay and reverb (ambience).