FMented Posted July 30, 2019 Share Posted July 30, 2019 Hi all. I just opened bandlab app on my phone and I think it's interesting where you can collaborate with somebody to make a song. BTW I got a track, would you guys help me to make it an actual song or just leave me a feedback because I still learn how to mix. Here's my track https://www.bandlab.com/revisions/e29ff012-91b2-e911-bcd0-2818789a0161 2 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rik Posted July 30, 2019 Share Posted July 30, 2019 Hey Fm, can’t help you with mixing but you’ve got a nice basic track to solo over, bit short though Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FMented Posted July 30, 2019 Author Share Posted July 30, 2019 5 hours ago, Rik said: Hey Fm, can’t help you with mixing but you’ve got a nice basic track to solo over, bit short though Thanks for feedback Rik, I think I should copy-paste some instrument and add a little bit variation on drum and guitar track to make it longer so people can do something with it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Old Joad Posted July 30, 2019 Share Posted July 30, 2019 yo, dang good start to a song. it has a bit of a Jane's Addiction vibe.. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FMented Posted July 30, 2019 Author Share Posted July 30, 2019 5 hours ago, Joad said: yo, dang good start to a song. it has a bit of a Jane's Addiction vibe.. never heard Jane's Addiction, but thanks for feedback buddy Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
thegaltieribrothers Posted August 3, 2019 Share Posted August 3, 2019 Hi FMented, I like the time signature which gives a sort of restless energy to this track as well as the rock energy you put into the guitar part. Thanks for sharing. Good Job! regards paul Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FMented Posted August 4, 2019 Author Share Posted August 4, 2019 20 hours ago, thegaltieribrothers said: Hi FMented, I like the time signature which gives a sort of restless energy to this track as well as the rock energy you put into the guitar part. Thanks for sharing. Good Job! regards paul Thanks for listening Paul, very appreciated Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ciodontrax Posted August 17, 2019 Share Posted August 17, 2019 I think the cymbals are too loud and guitars need a little tweak, bass area must be edited. Good luck. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FMented Posted August 17, 2019 Author Share Posted August 17, 2019 (edited) 1 hour ago, Harry C. said: I think the cymbals are too loud and guitars need a little tweak, bass area must be edited. Good luck. Thanks for taking your time Harry, very nice and spesific criticism, I'll try it. Thanks ? Edited August 17, 2019 by FMented Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
freddy j Posted August 17, 2019 Share Posted August 17, 2019 Hi FMented. I think you have a great start on this number! It reminds me of something I heard on a show I was watching on TV. It was used as background music in scene with a bit of tension or anticipation. BTW, I think the guitar sound is rather cool. I like the wide panning that you have used. However, on my cans the instruments panned left were a bit low. The interplay between the edgy guitar parts and the softer piano part are a great contrast in defining the edgy nature of this song. Perhaps adding an intro and outro would add to the length of the song (as mentioned above). Also including other edgy parts using other instrumentation or other extended riffs (e.g., a distorted guitar lead ?) would help to extend the songs length and add an extra level of "edginess". Just a couple of thoughts. I look forward to hearing the final product. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FMented Posted August 17, 2019 Author Share Posted August 17, 2019 2 hours ago, freddy j said: Hi FMented. I think you have a great start on this number! It reminds me of something I heard on a show I was watching on TV. It was used as background music in scene with a bit of tension or anticipation. BTW, I think the guitar sound is rather cool. I like the wide panning that you have used. However, on my cans the instruments panned left were a bit low. The interplay between the edgy guitar parts and the softer piano part are a great contrast in defining the edgy nature of this song. Perhaps adding an intro and outro would add to the length of the song (as mentioned above). Also including other edgy parts using other instrumentation or other extended riffs (e.g., a distorted guitar lead ?) would help to extend the songs length and add an extra level of "edginess". Just a couple of thoughts. I look forward to hearing the final product. You are the man, this song is about 1 minute, but I think you take 2-3 minutes to wrote this, thank you very much for listening, for sugestion, and detail review. I have a hard time eq ing the guitar parts because I only use acoustic guitar in this song, actually I have a solo for this song but its difficult to play on acoustic guitar, at least I found it hard to tapping on acoustic guitar. Btw thanks for wasting your time ? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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