Chaos Ravine 2.0- drums by Markno999

[noynekker]

Lots to like here Lynn ! Interesting, swirling and evolving as it goes, cool sound effects panned all round, you've really experimented in the audio recording here. (Yes, I think you always do)

I found the verse chord progression very different, and really like the way it chromatically bends my ear. Also, enjoyed your guitar playing and effects that you use there. The ending, hmmm. sounds like someone pulled the power plug. maybe that's what you intended . . . to tie in the lyrics . . . though, I kinda' wish "musically", maybe an explosion, or edgy sound effect might have wrapped it up it better. 

As always, just a great inspiring listen !

[Lynn Wilson]

12 hours ago, noynekker said:

Lots to like here Lynn ! Interesting, swirling and evolving as it goes, cool sound effects panned all round, you've really experimented in the audio recording here. (Yes, I think you always do)

I found the verse chord progression very different, and really like the way it chromatically bends my ear. Also, enjoyed your guitar playing and effects that you use there. The ending, hmmm. sounds like someone pulled the power plug. maybe that's what you intended . . . to tie in the lyrics . . . though, I kinda' wish "musically", maybe an explosion, or edgy sound effect might have wrapped it up it better. 

As always, just a great inspiring listen !

Noynekker, thank you for your nice comments and suggestion!  You may be right about an explosion at the end of this song; a cool idea that may find its way there.  
Actually, I was looking for something different to end the song because I often just fade out the ending.  Again, thanks for the encouraging words!

[Jesse Screed]

I can dig this Lynn.  You always go outside of the box and I appreciate that.  I like the panning too, and of course the guitars are always great!  Nice work...again.

[Lynn Wilson]

17 hours ago, Jesse Screed said:

I can dig this Lynn.  You always go outside of the box and I appreciate that.  I like the panning too, and of course the guitars are always great!  Nice work...again.

So much appreciated, Jesse!  You're the leader of "outside the box", and you've inspired many to think differently about how to present music.  Rock on!

[jack c.]

man what key changes!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!at the start bass and drums need to tightened up.jack c.

[Wookiee]

I decided to go straight for version 2.0, nice mix coming across here at The 4077, always enjoyed that type of HH pattern infuses a sense of energy without distracting.

Sweet  

[Lynn Wilson]

On 4/20/2023 at 1:24 PM, jack c. said:

man what key changes!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!at the start bass and drums need to tightened up.jack c.

Hi Jack, thanks for listening in and your perceptive response!  Perhaps you listened to the first version instead of 2.0?  Markno999 and I cleaned up the beginning in 2.0, which others had noticed, too.  I appreciate your input!

 

On 4/21/2023 at 8:56 AM, Wookiee said:

I decided to go straight for version 2.0, nice mix coming across here at The 4077, always enjoyed that type of HH pattern infuses a sense of energy without distracting.

Sweet  

Thank you, Wookie for your kind words and time!  I always feel better when it sounds good on your system.  Markno999 gets the credit for the cool drums; this is where he really shines.