bats brew Posted January 7, 2019 Share Posted January 7, 2019 3rd mix, un-mastered, final arrangement, it's got to be topped and tailed, has an extra 30 seconds or so at the end. i think the bass line is too strong, so i need some feedback on that... and the final chorus needs to be louder. also, looking for translation issues at this point, before mastering. this song is supposed to be a sort of 'pick me up' for anyone feeling blue. https://soundcloud.com/bats-brew/on-ur-way-3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
daryl1968 Posted January 7, 2019 Share Posted January 7, 2019 Hi Bats Firstly, great song. It's very difficult to criticize mate - there may be a bit of low end mud going on if you wanna nitpick but we're only talking a tweak. Maybe roll a bit off the kick? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wookiee Posted January 7, 2019 Share Posted January 7, 2019 The mix sounds quite dense here Bat's, not quite got the same open spacey feel most of your stuff has, arrangement sounds good, not hearing bass dominating. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SPAK Posted January 7, 2019 Share Posted January 7, 2019 Sounds great here too ... looking forward to the master Good work Bat! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bats brew Posted January 7, 2019 Author Share Posted January 7, 2019 3 hours ago, daryl1968 said: Hi Bats Firstly, great song. It's very difficult to criticize mate - there may be a bit of low end mud going on if you wanna nitpick but we're only talking a tweak. Maybe roll a bit off the kick? hey daryl! thanks for listening and commenting, kick, eh? yep, this drum track is hard, because it's a single stereo file, but i have some good eq's i can focus on kick woof. thanks for the suggestion Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
daryl1968 Posted January 7, 2019 Share Posted January 7, 2019 1 minute ago, batsbrew said: hey daryl! thanks for listening and commenting, kick, eh? yep, this drum track is hard, because it's a single stereo file, but i have some good eq's i can focus on kick woof. thanks for the suggestion Kick woof. My new favourite phrase. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bats brew Posted January 8, 2019 Author Share Posted January 8, 2019 On 1/7/2019 at 10:12 AM, Wookiee said: The mix sounds quite dense here Bat's, not quite got the same open spacey feel most of your stuff has, arrangement sounds good, not hearing bass dominating. HEY WOOKIEE! yea, this is a bit dense, well, i say that, but then, when you break it down, it has two rhythm guitars, a bass, drums, and vocals. it DOES get dense in the second section! LOL, but same instruments. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Eric Parsons Posted January 8, 2019 Share Posted January 8, 2019 Hey Bat - I've always enjoyed your tunes, but this one is far and away my new favorite. All the parts fit together so well, with a really nice tone on the bass. The vocal lines are superb. Thanks for sharing! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Amicus717 Posted January 9, 2019 Share Posted January 9, 2019 Great song, I really like it. Excellent vocal work. Love the change at 2:16... I did hear a bit of thickness in the mix, for what it's worth. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
thegaltieribrothers Posted January 10, 2019 Share Posted January 10, 2019 Hi Batsbrew, Nice track which I found uplifting + enjoyed the guitar solos. Thanks for sharing. Good Job! regards paul Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bats brew Posted January 11, 2019 Author Share Posted January 11, 2019 On 1/7/2019 at 10:54 AM, SPAK said: Sounds great here too ... looking forward to the master Good work Bat! thanks spak, appreciate the listen Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bats brew Posted January 11, 2019 Author Share Posted January 11, 2019 On 1/8/2019 at 3:13 PM, Tagruvto said: Hey Bat - I've always enjoyed your tunes, but this one is far and away my new favorite. All the parts fit together so well, with a really nice tone on the bass. The vocal lines are superb. Thanks for sharing! hi tagruvto! glad you dig this one in particular, it's a bit of a departure, i'm looking for some things i haven't really done before... On 1/8/2019 at 5:33 PM, Amicus717 said: Great song, I really like it. Excellent vocal work. Love the change at 2:16... I did hear a bit of thickness in the mix, for what it's worth. thickness, check. i hear it too. it's going to require some shifting of low and low mids, to get it right. thanks for the feedback. 10 hours ago, thegaltieribrothers said: Hi Batsbrew, Nice track which I found uplifting + enjoyed the guitar solos. Thanks for sharing. Good Job! regards paul hey paul! glad you found it uplifting...... that was the goal. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ciodontrax Posted January 11, 2019 Share Posted January 11, 2019 Great Vocals, nice background vox, good sound, top performance!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bats brew Posted January 12, 2019 Author Share Posted January 12, 2019 8 hours ago, Harry C. said: Great Vocals, nice background vox, good sound, top performance!! thanks so much harry! appreciate it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kevin Walsh Posted January 12, 2019 Share Posted January 12, 2019 Great song, killer lyrics and as always your vocals are a standout. You really know what you're doing with those great pipes of yours. Guitars are great, and that's a flat-out amazing solo. I totally hate you right now. I agree that the bottom is a bit heavy through my headphones, a pair of AKG271II's corrected with Sonarworks. Fantastic arrangement! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bats brew Posted January 12, 2019 Author Share Posted January 12, 2019 12 hours ago, Kevin Walsh said: Great song, killer lyrics and as always your vocals are a standout. You really know what you're doing with those great pipes of yours. Guitars are great, and that's a flat-out amazing solo. I totally hate you right now. I agree that the bottom is a bit heavy through my headphones, a pair of AKG271II's corrected with Sonarworks. Fantastic arrangement! THANKS SO MUCH KEVIN.. for the kind words, they encourage! i'm working that bottom.... i'll post a new one in the not too distant future. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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