Two People (UPDATED)

[Glenn Stanton]

updated - new vocal performances, and some recommended changes. 

BPM 75
Key G Major

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did she tell you it was a rainy day
she found another to love her and left to go her way

it's so sad, i never knew
let me tell you my friend it could happen to you

i was lost and alone not knowing what to do
i cried out isn't there another heart that's true?

i called, you answered you touched my heart and soul
so i learned this lesson i want you all to know

in the adverse times of your life if you find someone
who makes you happy you ask them to stay
and everything will be okay

two people
loving each other
two people
falling in love

woke up with the sun one morning, and i rolled over in bed
and there you were darling, then you touched my head

you told me once, or you told me twice
that loving you is all i need

not something i could lie about
'cause sure the feeling is nice
and everything has turned out right

two people
loving each other
two people
falling in love

two people
loving each other
two people
falling in love

falling in love

Edited December 21, 2023 by Glenn Stanton
updated

[Leadfoot]

It's a nice song. I think it could really benefit from some harmonies in the chorus. It's a good track though.

[Bajan Blue]

Hi Glenn

The first thing i heard (first 20 secs) on the vocal was the sibilance and the compression artifacts. i really would look at that personally.

Apart from that this has the makings of a really good track

Cool

Nigel

 

 

[Wookiee]

As noted above other than a few minor mix tweaks this is a pleasant track.

[mark skinner]

 Nice one Glen ! I liked the swelling on the cello track. Hard to tell it was a cello but sounded great to me. My first impression of the piano was I thought it should be a little brighter..  Great track with a Lot of potential. Enjoyed it .. mark

[Glenn Stanton]

On 12/9/2022 at 2:02 AM, Bajan Blue said:

The first thing i heard (first 20 secs) on the vocal was the sibilance and the compression artifacts. i really would look at that personally.

thanks!

Edited December 21, 2023 by Glenn Stanton