Glenn Stanton Posted December 8, 2022 Share Posted December 8, 2022 (edited) updated - new vocal performances, and some recommended changes. BPM 75 Key G Major -------------------------------------------------- did she tell you it was a rainy day she found another to love her and left to go her way it's so sad, i never knew let me tell you my friend it could happen to you i was lost and alone not knowing what to do i cried out isn't there another heart that's true? i called, you answered you touched my heart and soul so i learned this lesson i want you all to know in the adverse times of your life if you find someone who makes you happy you ask them to stay and everything will be okay two people loving each other two people falling in love woke up with the sun one morning, and i rolled over in bed and there you were darling, then you touched my head you told me once, or you told me twice that loving you is all i need not something i could lie about 'cause sure the feeling is nice and everything has turned out right two people loving each other two people falling in love two people loving each other two people falling in love falling in love Edited December 21, 2023 by Glenn Stanton updated 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Leadfoot Posted December 8, 2022 Share Posted December 8, 2022 It's a nice song. I think it could really benefit from some harmonies in the chorus. It's a good track though. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bajan Blue Posted December 9, 2022 Share Posted December 9, 2022 Hi Glenn The first thing i heard (first 20 secs) on the vocal was the sibilance and the compression artifacts. i really would look at that personally. Apart from that this has the makings of a really good track Cool Nigel 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wookiee Posted December 9, 2022 Share Posted December 9, 2022 As noted above other than a few minor mix tweaks this is a pleasant track. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mark skinner Posted December 9, 2022 Share Posted December 9, 2022 Nice one Glen ! I liked the swelling on the cello track. Hard to tell it was a cello but sounded great to me. My first impression of the piano was I thought it should be a little brighter.. Great track with a Lot of potential. Enjoyed it .. mark 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Glenn Stanton Posted December 12, 2022 Author Share Posted December 12, 2022 (edited) On 12/9/2022 at 2:02 AM, Bajan Blue said: The first thing i heard (first 20 secs) on the vocal was the sibilance and the compression artifacts. i really would look at that personally. thanks! Edited December 21, 2023 by Glenn Stanton Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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