The Eternal Optimist Posted November 28, 2022 Share Posted November 28, 2022 (edited) From a mix, arrangement or really anything perspective. Very mild explicit language warning (Rap lyrics over guitar, bass, drums, synth) Edited November 28, 2022 by The Eternal Optimist Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wookiee Posted November 28, 2022 Share Posted November 28, 2022 Not really my thing, but as you asked this is what occurs to these furry ears. The Vox FX gets old quickly, perhaps a break down without it. The drums are quite repetitive and lack punch on the kick, again a break down and come back with a different drum/HH pattern. You have the makings it just needs a fee tweaks. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DaveT2 Posted November 29, 2022 Share Posted November 29, 2022 I would drop out some of the these instruments during the vocal part, they would have more impact then when they come back. Drums seem a bit wrong for rap. Too rock style. Need more definition, not exactly sure how to describe it. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bajan Blue Posted November 29, 2022 Share Posted November 29, 2022 Hi - I think Wookie got it spot on - good effort Nigel 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Eternal Optimist Posted December 1, 2022 Author Share Posted December 1, 2022 On 11/29/2022 at 12:48 AM, Wookiee said: Not really my thing, but as you asked this is what occurs to these furry ears. The Vox FX gets old quickly, perhaps a break down without it. The drums are quite repetitive and lack punch on the kick, again a break down and come back with a different drum/HH pattern. You have the makings it just needs a fee tweaks. Thanks! appreciate the tips. I'll mess around with the levels on the kick. I've only been learning drums a while and definitely need to learn more beats and fills! The VoxFX is something I played with to compensate for singing skill but it does have a downside as you're right it is somewhat in your face Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Eternal Optimist Posted December 1, 2022 Author Share Posted December 1, 2022 On 11/29/2022 at 5:33 PM, DaveT2 said: I would drop out some of the these instruments during the vocal part, they would have more impact then when they come back. Drums seem a bit wrong for rap. Too rock style. Need more definition, not exactly sure how to describe it. Cheers, the drums are definitely a bit rock like. I need to learn a few more fills and beats. I chose a 'classic drum machine' on my iPad to plug the drums into but still used a classic rock beat when playing Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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