SPAK Posted July 8, 2019 Share Posted July 8, 2019 (edited) I think I've fallen from this world, and I wish I didn't care I've grown tired of listening to the lies, Of my 'so called' peers... Of my 'so called' peers I think I've fallen from this world, (Backing 'I think I've fallen') That feeds our hunger with despair, Words from politicians promise better lives But it always ends the same … finding someone else to blame Choir voices join in [And I wish that I could pray, and believe there'd be a day] When the innocents of little children's hearts Would stay with them forever Could stay with us forever Irish Pipe M8 I think I've fallen from a place, ... that could hide the sadness from your face Children grow up and go their own way Leaving family behind …..they leave us behind. I think I've fallen to a place (Backing 'I think I've fallen') ...and disappeared without a trace This world is full of ships all passing in the night ….. Vanishing from sight They're vanishing from sight …. vanishing from sight Chorus voices :- I'm disappearing …. I'm disappearing I think I'm falling …....A Edited September 27, 2019 by SPAK 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kloon Posted July 8, 2019 Share Posted July 8, 2019 Lovely track! ♥️ 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SPAK Posted July 8, 2019 Author Share Posted July 8, 2019 46 minutes ago, kloon said: Lovely track! ♥️ Thanks Mate Steve Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jesse Screed Posted July 8, 2019 Share Posted July 8, 2019 outstanding! made me cry, touched me it did nothing more to say 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SPAK Posted July 8, 2019 Author Share Posted July 8, 2019 2 hours ago, Jesse Screed said: outstanding! made me cry, touched me it did nothing more to say Thankyou Jesse ...my words to your heart ............... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bjornpdx Posted July 8, 2019 Share Posted July 8, 2019 Beautiful song, Steve. The background voices are very effective and complement your vocal well. I like the Irish pipe. I always take notice of lyrics. Really like the variations on 'falling from this world' and the repeating phrase in the last line of each verse, a technique that I'm going to steal. I'm probably not interpreting the words as you intended but that's okay. 'Peers' not 'piers' 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Grem Posted July 8, 2019 Share Posted July 8, 2019 When I tried to watch, this is what I got: 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
antler Posted July 8, 2019 Share Posted July 8, 2019 Really nice song! To me it has a calming/dreamy/surreal feel to it, and sounds like the type of song used in the game Life is Strange. (I mean that as a compliment). 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
amiller Posted July 8, 2019 Share Posted July 8, 2019 (edited) Very nice. The song has an irony about it. It sounds soothing while conveying a sad truth. Well done! *note: check your spelling. "I've grown tires of listening to the lies,” I think “tires” should be “tired. Edited July 8, 2019 by amiller 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SPAK Posted July 9, 2019 Author Share Posted July 9, 2019 6 hours ago, amiller said: Very nice. The song has an irony about it. It sounds soothing while conveying a sad truth. Well done! *note: check your spelling. "I've grown tires of listening to the lies,” I think “tires” should be “tired. Thanks I'll change that pronto ...and thanks for the compliment ? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SPAK Posted July 9, 2019 Author Share Posted July 9, 2019 (edited) 15 hours ago, Grem said: When I tried to watch, this is what I got: Looking into that ... well strange ....☹️ ......I've sorted it out ! Edited July 9, 2019 by SPAK 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SPAK Posted July 9, 2019 Author Share Posted July 9, 2019 15 hours ago, bjornpdx said: Beautiful song, Steve. The background voices are very effective and complement your vocal well. I like the Irish pipe. I always take notice of lyrics. Really like the variations on 'falling from this world' and the repeating phrase in the last line of each verse, a technique that I'm going to steal. I'm probably not interpreting the words as you intended but that's okay. 'Peers' not 'piers' Thanks mate. and you don't have to steal it, I'll share it with you ...Spellcheck decided to change peers ... gives a new meaning to my song LOL Always great to hear your thinking as I know your another lyrics guy. BTW It took all of three days to get that 'Irish pipe' to sound as it does, so thanks for the like? All the best Steve Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HIBI Posted July 9, 2019 Share Posted July 9, 2019 15 hours ago, Grem said: When I tried to watch, this is what I got: Same here. I can watch it on YouTube site. It's beautiful song. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SPAK Posted July 9, 2019 Author Share Posted July 9, 2019 1 minute ago, HIBI said: Same here. I can watch it on YouTube site. It's beautiful song. It's now sorted ...but thankyou for listening on the tube ? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HIBI Posted July 9, 2019 Share Posted July 9, 2019 1 minute ago, SPAK said: It's now sorted ...but thankyou for listening on the tube ? Oh yeah, now it's sorted. ? 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Johnbee58 Posted July 9, 2019 Share Posted July 9, 2019 Really enjoyed this. Words are so true. Imagery conveys the idea beautifully. ?John B 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PhonoBrainer Posted July 9, 2019 Share Posted July 9, 2019 cool tune with a grrrrrreat lead vocal! Nice and out in front. That's a good mix. I like the sparse arrangement, really held my interest. The video shows at 480p as the highest resolution which strikes me as undercutting the very high quality of your song. I don't know if you can produce a HD version? It works ok, but I found myself at times not watching the vid just to enjoy your awesome lead vocal. Cool tune, bro. cheers, -Tom 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bob Oister Posted July 10, 2019 Share Posted July 10, 2019 Hi, Steve, Great song with excellent composition, arrangement and lyrics, and outstanding vocals!? The instrumental performances are beautiful, and the mix is absolutely top notch and perfect for the theme and genre. The song is absolutely dripping with emotion, fantastic work, Steve!? Best Wishes, Bob Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SPAK Posted July 10, 2019 Author Share Posted July 10, 2019 On 7/9/2019 at 6:22 PM, emeraldsoul said: cool tune with a grrrrrreat lead vocal! Nice and out in front. That's a good mix. I like the sparse arrangement, really held my interest. The video shows at 480p as the highest resolution which strikes me as undercutting the very high quality of your song. I don't know if you can produce a HD version? It works ok, but I found myself at times not watching the vid just to enjoy your awesome lead vocal. Cool tune, bro. cheers, -Tom Thanks for the info Tom, given your observations I'm sure I could do better with he vid, and I no idea it was 480 ..But I did it on a whim, never a good idea given that it took so long to write! Should have paid a little more attention ?. I know I've said it before but I read your input, not only on my stuff, but on other songs with more than just interest ... You really do make a difference! So thanks mate very much appreciated .... Steve Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SPAK Posted July 10, 2019 Author Share Posted July 10, 2019 14 hours ago, Bob Oister said: Hi, Steve, Great song with excellent composition, arrangement and lyrics, and outstanding vocals!? The instrumental performances are beautiful, and the mix is absolutely top notch and perfect for the theme and genre. The song is absolutely dripping with emotion, fantastic work, Steve!? Best Wishes, Bob Steady on Bob I'll be lookin' for some money soon LOL ... I bow my head and thank you for such a great review of my song ‼️ All the best Steve Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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