ABull Posted June 30, 2019 Share Posted June 30, 2019 (edited) uuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu Edited July 8, 2019 by ABull 2 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ABull Posted June 30, 2019 Author Share Posted June 30, 2019 (edited) 7-4-2019 Hey fellas -- thanks for listening and posting comments -- much appreciated. ~~Allan Edited July 4, 2019 by ABull Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Grem Posted June 30, 2019 Share Posted June 30, 2019 (edited) Nice I like it!! Really mellow tune well done. I like your vocals. (Listening to Mr Together). I like the pop feel of this song. Subject could be a funny one, or a sad one. Depends on how you take it. At first I thought it was funny. But then as I listened to it again, I thought maybe she was calling and letting the guy know she's getting married in the hope that he would stop her. And the guy is sitting there trying to convince himself that she's better off with the other guy. But then again, it could just be a simple pop song!! : ) I wouldn't change anything with it. I liked it as it is. [edit] Harvey Family surprised the h**l out of me! Dat's a good one there. Edited June 30, 2019 by Grem Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Johnbee58 Posted July 1, 2019 Share Posted July 1, 2019 (edited) Hey! This isn't the song I reviewed earlier. What the hell? ? OK. Listened to the new one. Lovely tune. The solo instrument sounds very effective. Sad lyrics. Overall nice ballad. I like your style. You remind me of a hero of mine-Dan Fogelberg. ?John B Edited July 1, 2019 by Johnbee58 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
amiller Posted July 1, 2019 Share Posted July 1, 2019 I like the bittersweet lyrics. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Myriad Rocker Posted July 1, 2019 Share Posted July 1, 2019 Really dig the vocal at 0:58. Very nice touch. Really great track, I enjoyed it. The vocal seemed a touch too forward at the beginning, but settled in nicely as it got into it. Might have just been me. Nice playing! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Old Joad Posted July 1, 2019 Share Posted July 1, 2019 This song should be playing 24 hours a day on a jukebox in a smoky bar somewhere on the bayou. this is a dark, emotional ballad. whats not to like? I hope you post more songs here... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bob Oister Posted July 3, 2019 Share Posted July 3, 2019 Hi, Allan, You've got a really pleasant sounding pop song here, with excellent songwriting and lyrics, great instrumental performances, and fantastic vocals and harmonies!? I agree with Joad, and I bet this could be a great mainstream radio pop track.? Nice work, buddy, have a good one! Bob Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
thegaltieribrothers Posted July 5, 2019 Share Posted July 5, 2019 Hi Allan, Nice song and good arrangement. Thanks for sharing. Good Job! regards paul Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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