ABull Posted May 30, 2019 Share Posted May 30, 2019 (edited) oooooooooooooo Edited June 14, 2019 by ABull Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ABull Posted May 30, 2019 Author Share Posted May 30, 2019 (edited) Hey mates -- thanks for all the listens and comments. Edited June 14, 2019 by ABull Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
thegaltieribrothers Posted May 31, 2019 Share Posted May 31, 2019 Hi ABull, Nice play on words and hook with a quirky song to boot. Well performed, thanks for sharing. Good Job! regards paul Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
freddy j Posted May 31, 2019 Share Posted May 31, 2019 Hi Allan. This is a really well put together song. It has an excellent pop feel to it. It has a bit of contrast with a bit of a cheery melody with what could be sad lyrics. BTW the lyrics are great! Nice one! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kakku Posted May 31, 2019 Share Posted May 31, 2019 Very catchy which is a sign of a good song Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
amiller Posted May 31, 2019 Share Posted May 31, 2019 Nice hook, melody, lyrics and arrangement. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jesse Screed Posted June 3, 2019 Share Posted June 3, 2019 Abull, you are a song smith really nice arrangement lots of real cool elements weaving in and out. this is top notch in the sense that not only does it have your style it is just very well constructed. every song I comment on in the song forum has something that stands out, it could be the emotion, it could be the urgency, it could be individual instrumental talent, or it could be the overall talent. I could tear this song apart and comment on each 8 bars, because there is something going on in each segment. I think everyone should listen very close to this song and notice the nuances. I think this would make a great theme song for a quirky netflix sitcom, you know, a dysfunctional family with separated spouses and the man starts to hit the bottle after he finds out she found someone who tickled her fancy more that he ever could. outstanding! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Douglas Kirby Posted June 3, 2019 Share Posted June 3, 2019 It's a cool catchy song - it hooked me - nice job. Sounded like a 60's mix to me - nothing wrong with that. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Johnbee58 Posted June 3, 2019 Share Posted June 3, 2019 Catchy in title and tune. I love your vocal style and harmonies. ?John B Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ABull Posted June 5, 2019 Author Share Posted June 5, 2019 On 5/31/2019 at 6:16 AM, thegaltieribrothers said: Hi ABull, Nice play on words and hook with a quirky song to boot. Well performed, thanks for sharing. Good Job! regards paul Thanks mate. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ABull Posted June 7, 2019 Author Share Posted June 7, 2019 On 5/31/2019 at 2:13 PM, freddy j said: Hi Allan. This is a really well put together song. It has an excellent pop feel to it. It has a bit of contrast with a bit of a cheery melody with what could be sad lyrics. BTW the lyrics are great! Nice one! Thanks Freddy -- glad you like the song esp. the lyrics mate. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kennywtelejazz Posted June 9, 2019 Share Posted June 9, 2019 You put into words VIA your song how I feel sometimes . The second I walk out my front door it's like a bad dream or a free for all out there . Yeah , I sure hope Mr Together lands on his feet ...same goes for me lol Kenny Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SPAK Posted June 9, 2019 Share Posted June 9, 2019 (edited) Blimey! I'm back in the 60's Great demo and thanks for the post ... loved it ..... Now where's that Watneys Red Barrel ?? Edited June 9, 2019 by SPAK Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ABull Posted June 9, 2019 Author Share Posted June 9, 2019 On 5/31/2019 at 2:43 PM, kakku said: Very catchy which is a sign of a good song Much thanks mate, but we know that's not always the case, right? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kakku Posted June 10, 2019 Share Posted June 10, 2019 (edited) 4 hours ago, ABull said: Much thanks mate, but we know that's not always the case, right? You are correct. I often do think so though. Now that you reminded me of that fact i feel much better about many of my tunes. Btw, where did you find that creepy doll face on your avatar Edited June 10, 2019 by kakku Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kakku Posted June 11, 2019 Share Posted June 11, 2019 Hey. I did not mean anything bad with what I said. The doll face is actually cool now that I took a better look Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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