Down to the Waterline

[Jane Laws]

It's been a very hot summer in Perth down in the southern hemisphere.

It got me writing a fun song inspired by living by the beach.

Down to the Waterline

As always, interested in feedback.

[garybrun]

Very nice Jane.
Was looking at some of your other tracks too.
Well done..

[Jane Laws]

Just now, garybrun said:

Very nice Jane.
Was looking at some of your other tracks too.
Well done..

Thanks Gary

[bjornpdx]

Love this. Took me away from the dismal gray of February in Oregon for a while.
-Bjorn

[Jane Laws]

2 hours ago, bjornpdx said:

Love this. Took me away from the dismal gray of February in Oregon for a while.
-Bjorn

Thanks, Bjorn, we are looking forward to some cooler weather here in Perth, I think it's the hottest summer on record

[Wookiee]

Nicely done, mix works well here, good clear vocal.

Only trouble was when I read the title I heard Dire Straights Down to the Waterline in the furry brain.

[SUPAREELS]

How are you producing the backing? sounds like a PSR Yamaha thingy .. but your vocal is great .

S/R Music

[jack c.]

your beautiful needs some eq as it muffled.fine job.jack c.

[Larry T.]

agree that your vocal is way good....the music behind you is good but too, what's the word....perfect????....Good Luck ?⛱️??

[mark skinner]

Good to see you back with another creation.  A nice "feel good" one for sure.   I enjoyed the listen.       mark

[Jane Laws]

5 hours ago, Wookiee said:

Nicely done, mix works well here, good clear vocal.

Only trouble was when I read the title I heard Dire Straights Down to the Waterline in the furry brain.

Thanks, Wookiee, listening to Dire Straights version, now, to refresh my mind

 

Edited February 18, 2022 by Jane Laws

[Jane Laws]

4 hours ago, SupaReels said:

How are you producing the backing? sounds like a PSR Yamaha thingy .. but your vocal is great .

S/R Music

Thanks, I have a Korg Harvian 30, most of the backing instrumentation comes from there

[Jane Laws]

Thanks for having a listen, it has been a pleasure to use Cakewalk over so many years

[noynekker]

@Jane Laws I'm likin' this one, your vocal delivery is so smooth . . . it's a very friendly song to hear tonight, thanks for posting something sunny (I'm in the north)

[Makke]

Beautiful song and performance.  Nice sounds with warm summer mood.

[Paul Bush]

Yeah i concure with all the above vocals were lovely and clear to me ..really nice

[Old Joad]

On 2/17/2022 at 11:20 PM, bjornpdx said:

Love this. Took me away from the dismal gray of February in Oregon for a while.
-Bjorn

What he said only Washington State for me.

[steve@baselines.com]

Nice groove Jane.

Steve

 

[antler]

Nice song Jane; good mix with a great chilled vibe.

[Bajan Blue]

Hi Jane

Great song and performance - i enjoyed it a lot

You have a great voice

Nigel