beltromi's identity

[thegaltieribrothers]

Greetings fellow Cakewalk by Bandlab travellers,

please find a link below to my latest creation about when the one you love, loves someone else; a condition also known as

beltromi's identity

any comments or critiques are most welcome.

thanks for listening.

regards

paul

[bjornpdx]

Paul
A lovely sad song, well played and sung. That guitar intro is great and the accompaniment is perfect.
Here and there the timing seemed off like you're straying a bit from 4/4? Not that it matters that much, just something I noticed.
Thanks for posting.  Never heard of Beltromi before.

[kakku]

Very nice. Heart break is real bad

[Lynn Wilson]

Paul, your production skills have vastly improved over the last several years, and this song shows that improvement very well.  I now know the name for a syndrome I'm well acquainted with ~~  Keep up the good work.

[thegaltieribrothers]

Hi Bjorn,

Thanks for your comments and your notes on the timing.

Hi Kakku,

Thanks for listening + yes love isn't fair.

Hi Lynn,

Thank you for your kind words on my production skills.

Thank you all for your comments and for listening, it is greatly appreciated.

regards

paul

[Jesse Screed]

This is the real deal right here.

You might as well bone saw your chest open and expose your throbbing heart.

furigcking best song ever.

 

[Johnbee58]

Sweet acoustic guitar work and nice vocal arrangement.  Come together nicely.

?John B.

[thegaltieribrothers]

Hi Jesse,

That just might be the best compliment I've ever had ? 

Hi John,

Thanks for the comments on the guitar and vocals.

Thank you both for listening and commenting, it is greatly appreciated.

regards

paul

[Wookiee]

This has a very heartfelt feel to the vocal Paul, as Lynn said your production skills have come on in leaps and bounds, good stuff thanks for sharing.

[PhonoBrainer]

I like the buildup of instruments and it has a Brian Wilson quality about it. Although that itself is pretty hard to define.

Nice one!

[thegaltieribrothers]

Hi Wookie,

Thank you for your kind comments.

Hi emeraldsoul,

I'll take the Brian Wilson comparison any day.

Thank you both for listening and for commenting, it is really appreciated.

regards

paul

[RobertWS]

23 hours ago, thegaltieribrothers said:

I'll take the Brian Wilson comparison any day. 

 

The first few measures in the chorus of Brian Wilson's song "I Get Around" taught me about chromatic harmony.

"....from town to town."   Harmonizing a flat 2nd note with a major VI chord was genius!   A lot became clear to me after that.

 

Edited May 31, 2019 by RobertWS

[amiller]

This song has a raw quality to it that makes it sound so natural, human and heartfelt.   I enjoyed it.

[thegaltieribrothers]

Hi RobertWS,

Thanks for your comments on Brian Wilson.

Hi amiller,

Thanks for your kind comments, I'm glad you enjoyed it.

Thank you both for listening and commenting, it is really appreciated.

regards

paul

[daryl1968]

this is really nice Paul - heartfelt lyrics sung with emotion. Really enjoyed the backing vocals

[freddy j]

This is an excellent song Paul.  Your lyrics effectively convey what seems to be very personal emotions.  Melody , your vocals and the BGV's really convey the emotion of this song as well.  This number has some serious angst and emotion but the instrumentation adds a bit of a cheery counter measure to that.  How in the world did you manage that.

Really good stuff -- one of your best!

[thegaltieribrothers]

Hi daryl,

Thanks for your comments, glad you enjoyed the backing vocals.

Hi freddy,

angst and emotion seem to be my middle name at the moment ? 

Thank you both for listening and commenting, it is really appreciated.

regards

paul

[Douglas Kirby]

First off - I really enjoyed the lyrics - nicely done.  And the mix sounded quite nice to my ears. Nice job on the lead vocal.

Thanks for posting.

[thegaltieribrothers]

Hi Douglas,

Thank you for listening and commenting, it is really appreciated.

regards

paul