"Honest" hiphop track mastered in Cakewalk

[Zimonio]

I'm a swedish rapper who just released a new song "Honest"

 

I'm looking to make it big and become a world famous rapstar so any feedback is appreciated

 

[jack c.]

less highs on instrument which starts song.less cursing use other words.i like what ya have going.jack c.

[Zimonio]

5 hours ago, jack c. said:

less highs on instrument which starts song.less cursing use other words.i like what ya have going.jack c.

Thanks jack c! You know as a foreigner it's too easy to fall back on them dirty words as crutches for my rapping, maybe it's time I broaden my vocabulary