Suburban Susan master mix

[Paul Bush]

Well thanks for all your comments , I put quite a few hour`s in and well added new vocals , bridge etc never imagined i´d get such a positive response to this one as i binned it almost as fast as i wrote it .... so thanks for the support....

                                    Suburban Susan         by paul bush

She goes on every demonstration not just for the cause, it beats being alone,

she straps herself to the mast, to hide her dubious past,

While your new friends are stuck to the road …

Well you’ve been telling lies about your family ties you

don’t come from a broken home, Well she`s you’re a semi detached                                   

Aristocrat, dressing down for her gig on the road   

chorus

Well they can Sing ***** by jaaa on an old guitar, 

untill the ugly girls red In the face , Well you can all   

lock all  your arms, outside those factory farms. saving the human race.

           

Well they can Sing ***** by jaaa on an old guitar, 

And strap yourselves onto the fence, well wave your

banners high, next to the guy who reeks of pertuly oil and incense                                       

 

 Well the kids left home now your all alone, And your man´s got much better things to do

 well you’ve re-read all your books , and now your fading looks are  staring in the mirror at you ..

 If there’s just a slim chance, a whiff of romance,

 When loneliness gets to you,  Well just fantasy, but it

 might just be the right thing to pull you on through,

chorus                     

 Well they can Sing ***** by jaaa on an old guitar, 

  and the pudgy girl still getting no breaks

  Well she´s coloured her hair , more times than cher 

   And screamed slogan’s  till she`s blue in the face

Bridge

 She`s never been noticed for being a woman,

first time she`s felt part of the ``in´´crowd, now she cries out loud..             

                                    …..solo…...

Chorus                               

Well they can Sing ***** by jaaa on an old guitar, 

And miss piggy is still up for grabs and all the feminists smiled

with their adopted child And the vegans have eat all of the cake

Well they can Sing ***** by jaaa on an old guitar                     

In the hope of being on t.v

Well they marched just a mile, with their self-righteous smiles                                                          

Blowing whistles and tambourines

Well they can Sing ***** by jaaa on an old guitar, 

We´ll meet up back at the bar Switch on the BBC is it you is it me?

Just like daytime tv star

                                                       

 

Edited December 15, 2021 by Paul Bush

[mark skinner]

 Paul , I thought this was a Very well written song. You also have a Wonderful voice , great range and beautiful overtones.

I think this song deserves some additional time consuming , boring  , tedious timing editing.   Very impressive ..   mark

[jack c.]

i hear the feel of the song not being tight and some voice notes are off.jack c.

[Larry T.]

backing vox at certain parts adding "oooh's" and "ahhh's" and the like would bring it up a notch imho....at this point, as with all mixes, it all comes down to the ears and taste of whoever is doing the mix....that is one catchy chorus ???️?

[ABull]

Hey Paul, I agree that it could use some editing and the timing is wonky in places but kudos for the overall good work on this -- like the melody change going into the bridge -- like the bass tones too -- a lot to like in this one -- Allan. 

[Paul Bush]

Hi Chaps thanks for all your comments , considering I wasnt going to persue this song any further it  was only due to all the super response and encouragement  from you guys that I started again almost from scratch  and brought it thus far it seems i get to a point that i play the song and record  the so many times over that i get ``rose tinted glasses´´ on the brain where i just cant see/hear the Wonky bits anymore (the strings bridge  timing is out) ...so i´ll, as Mark rightly states i I should invest in some ..additional time consuming , boring  , tedious timing editing, once again thanks you for being so generous in your compliments and comments .....as my teacher used to say  ....good but can do better cheers P