Mixing a hiphop track

[Ewoof]

Can somebody please give me feedback on the mix on this track.

 

[jack c.]

ya needs that booming 808 bass line.some different sections with colors/tones.on the correct track.jack c.

[Wookiee]

Has some potential, obviously in need of a lyric, I would add a Sub Bass to the kick, it will get lost on Earbuds and the like but on good speakers. Perhaps a little more ear candy as it is quite repetitive even with the breaks.

It is probably worth pursuing though.