My Message For GOD

[jack c.]

 

[PhonoBrainer]

Ibtl!

Dear Mr. Wavesample,

Is that you? It's me, God.

If I exist, as a human you can't really understand me.

If I don't exist, then your question is time not very well spent. You might consider writing another love song in 4/4 time at 120bpm with a duration of 3:30, with a nice lift in the chorus. 

?

Have a nice day!

Sincerely,

God

P.S - I liked your song, you might boost the vocal a tad.

[jack c.]

2 hours ago, PhonoBrainer said:

Is that you? It's me, God.

i like your thoughts.did ya read me comments in soundcloud seen below song??jack c.

[garybrun]

I would boost you vocal a little more so your message cuts through.

Edited October 10, 2021 by garybrun

[bjornpdx]

Jack,   I like the churchy organ in the background.
I thought the ending could be even more powerful if you'd included some personal reasons for the message.
-Bjorn

[jack c.]

11 hours ago, bjornpdx said:

Jack,   I like the churchy organ in the background.
I thought the ending could be even more powerful if you'd included some personal reasons for the message.
-Bjorn

 

18 hours ago, garybrun said:

would boost you vocal a little more so your message cuts through.

thanks mates for thoughts some of the words are about me life.jack c.