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PhonoBrainer Posted October 10, 2021 Share Posted October 10, 2021 Ibtl! Dear Mr. Wavesample, Is that you? It's me, God. If I exist, as a human you can't really understand me. If I don't exist, then your question is time not very well spent. You might consider writing another love song in 4/4 time at 120bpm with a duration of 3:30, with a nice lift in the chorus. ? Have a nice day! Sincerely, God P.S - I liked your song, you might boost the vocal a tad. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jack c. Posted October 10, 2021 Author Share Posted October 10, 2021 2 hours ago, PhonoBrainer said: Is that you? It's me, God. i like your thoughts.did ya read me comments in soundcloud seen below song??jack c. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
garybrun Posted October 10, 2021 Share Posted October 10, 2021 (edited) I would boost you vocal a little more so your message cuts through. Edited October 10, 2021 by garybrun 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bjornpdx Posted October 11, 2021 Share Posted October 11, 2021 Jack, I like the churchy organ in the background. I thought the ending could be even more powerful if you'd included some personal reasons for the message. -Bjorn 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jack c. Posted October 11, 2021 Author Share Posted October 11, 2021 11 hours ago, bjornpdx said: Jack, I like the churchy organ in the background. I thought the ending could be even more powerful if you'd included some personal reasons for the message. -Bjorn 18 hours ago, garybrun said: would boost you vocal a little more so your message cuts through. thanks mates for thoughts some of the words are about me life.jack c. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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