Nio Sebez Posted October 9, 2021 Share Posted October 9, 2021 Hello colleagues, I share this instrumental song that I am doing. It's a version of an old flamenco song. I have put bass, drums and keyboards. I like the way it sounds. What is your opinion? https://niosebez.bandcamp.com/track/duelo-de-navajas 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jack c. Posted October 10, 2021 Share Posted October 10, 2021 ya really do great stuff!!!!!!!bring up bass guitar.jack c. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nio Sebez Posted October 11, 2021 Author Share Posted October 11, 2021 On 10/10/2021 at 5:33 PM, jack c. said: ya really do great stuff!!!!!!!bring up bass guitar.jack c. Thanks Jack for your words. The truth is that I also like how the bass is looking ? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
David Sprouse Posted October 12, 2021 Share Posted October 12, 2021 Bravo! The guitar was a little too perfect I think, needs some swing and humanization. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nio Sebez Posted October 12, 2021 Author Share Posted October 12, 2021 (edited) 8 hours ago, David Sprouse said: Bravo! The guitar was a little too perfect I think, needs some swing and humanization. Hello, thanks for commenting. What do you mean, solo or rhythm guitar? Edited October 12, 2021 by Nio Sebez Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
David Sprouse Posted October 14, 2021 Share Posted October 14, 2021 The solo lead sounded too perfect to me. Was it quantized? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nio Sebez Posted October 18, 2021 Author Share Posted October 18, 2021 On 10/14/2021 at 5:18 PM, David Sprouse said: The solo lead sounded too perfect to me. Was it quantized? Yes, I have quantized it a bit Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
antler Posted October 19, 2021 Share Posted October 19, 2021 It's nice - sparse but effective arrangement. The lead guitar might benefit from a tiny bit of humanisation/randomisation, and the note attacks sound quite rigid on the faster phrase openings. I enjoyed the listen though - well done! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nio Sebez Posted October 20, 2021 Author Share Posted October 20, 2021 (edited) 11 hours ago, antler said: It's nice - sparse but effective arrangement. The lead guitar might benefit from a tiny bit of humanisation/randomisation, and the note attacks sound quite rigid on the faster phrase openings. I enjoyed the listen though - well done! Thank you. I can't do that humanisation with melodyne because is not midi, the sólo was played by myself with my guitar.. Edited October 20, 2021 by Nio Sebez Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
musekamp Posted October 20, 2021 Share Posted October 20, 2021 Nice song and good playing! I like the overall sound of the combo and the way you bring in the keyboard strategically. My only suggestion would be to try to vary the dynamics a little more. Maybe start off a bit more gradually, or even drop out everything except guitar at some point and build back up. Anyway, good work! Not sure if you're looking for suggestions but my comments are meant to be constructive so I hope they come across that way Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jwnicholson78 Posted October 21, 2021 Share Posted October 21, 2021 I really liked the arrangement. Guitar sounded great. I do agree with other comments that the lead was maybe a little too quantized. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nio Sebez Posted October 22, 2021 Author Share Posted October 22, 2021 On 10/20/2021 at 10:39 PM, musekamp said: Nice song and good playing! I like the overall sound of the combo and the way you bring in the keyboard strategically. My only suggestion would be to try to vary the dynamics a little more. Maybe start off a bit more gradually, or even drop out everything except guitar at some point and build back up. Anyway, good work! Not sure if you're looking for suggestions but my comments are meant to be constructive so I hope they come across that way Thanks for your comments and for the suggestion. It is not actually finished, it lasts only 2 minutes and little. Possibly I will make some arrangement before closing it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nio Sebez Posted October 22, 2021 Author Share Posted October 22, 2021 22 hours ago, jwnicholson78 said: I really liked the arrangement. Guitar sounded great. I do agree with other comments that the lead was maybe a little too quantized. Yes, another colleague has already commented to me, possibly I will retouch that a bit before finishing it. Thanks! ? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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