Born Again - remixed

[Lynn Wilson]

32 minutes ago, jwnicholson78 said:

I don't know how much my suggestions are worth, but I'm happy to give them if it helps ?

I took another couple listens, and here's some additional thoughts, for whatever they are worth.  All the instruments seems to be basically in the same register.  The long electric notes, the electric piano, even the snare and percussion seem to be mostly sitting at the same pitch, so even though they are panned, they're fighting for attention.  

Also, as a piano player, the trills in the electric piano that hit at about 1:20 and again later sound overly programmed to me.  If so, a little bit of timing variation, accenting the 4th note, and quieting the notes in between will help immensely.  You might want to interrupt them with some nicely chosen chord stabs, rather than carrying them on for so long.

Jeff

Again, all good ideas!  Stay tuned!