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Bajan Blue Posted July 14, 2021 Share Posted July 14, 2021 Hi Jack - the sound (i think it is rain?) that is there from the start until about 1.57, I really think is too loud - distracts from your vocals Other than that Good start Nigel Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jack c. Posted July 14, 2021 Author Share Posted July 14, 2021 6 hours ago, Bajan Blue said: Hi Jack - the sound (i think it is rain?) yes .that's for listen/comments.jack c. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wookiee Posted July 15, 2021 Share Posted July 15, 2021 The Rain is to much by all means use it but do not let it obscure the important bits. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PhonoBrainer Posted July 15, 2021 Share Posted July 15, 2021 A tone poem with some cool instrumentation. Agreed that the rain could back off, particularly during the vocals. I feel like the rain is decreased a bit as some of the instrumentation comes in? Then suddenly out completely, then back for 3 seconds with parrots. A bit confusing! But as this is part 1 of something, maybe the answers come later. In any event, I hope those lyrics come back repeated for meaning, as they sounded kind of important! interested, -Tom Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jack c. Posted July 15, 2021 Author Share Posted July 15, 2021 8 hours ago, Wookiee said: The Rain is to much by all means use it but do not let it obscure the important bits. 3 hours ago, PhonoBrainer said: A tone poem with some cool instrumentation. thanks mates for listen/comments.jack c. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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