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[jack c.]

 

[Makke]

Booom! Nice groove with simple melody. Interesting arrangement and soundscape.

[Douglas Kirby]

You make some interesting music - quite unique, and this is no exception.  My only crit - why the dropouts? I saw that there were 5 of them.

[jack c.]

5 hours ago, Makke said:

Booom! Nice groove with simple melody. Interesting arrangement and soundscape.

 

4 hours ago, Douglas Kirby said:

My only crit - why the dropouts? I

thanks mates for listen/comments!i wanted dropouts for another texture throughout song.jack c.

[bjornpdx]

Jack I like the lyrics. Some of the parts are too long and repetitive
Your voice has a David Byrne quality which kind of fits your quirky style (and I mean that in a good way, seriously).
-Bjorn

[jack c.]

22 hours ago, bjornpdx said:

your quirky style

thanks for listen/comments!lately i've been doing lots of rock/soul.but i'm really into jazz/soul/progressive music.jack c.

[Bajan Blue]

Hi Jack

Good track and definitely echo the comment re David Byrne / Talking Heads

Cool stuff

Nigel