Paul Bush Posted May 23, 2021 Share Posted May 23, 2021 Hi chaps , well I hope this mix is an improvment to old mix , vocals are new cheers Oh and a new cover 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jack c. Posted May 23, 2021 Share Posted May 23, 2021 i mention this to a number of chaps.try singing song one more time to add some thickness and in tune ness and blend both together.jack c. 1 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bjornpdx Posted May 23, 2021 Share Posted May 23, 2021 Paul, you did well removing sibilance in this version (I think that's what people had commented on before) I like how clear the vocal is - no problem understanding the lyrics. And the lyrics tell the story very well. Not sure why the outro was repeated so often (the church bit) I really enjoyed listening to this. -Bjorn 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mark skinner Posted May 23, 2021 Share Posted May 23, 2021 (edited) Paul , this version seemed to have Way more power , especially on the chorus. I agree with Bjorn it could have ended a little quicker , I was listening while he posted and felt it before hand. I also thought the keys track (other than piano) could be lowered a little. You've got quite a "wide" vocal range and used it all Very well. Nice improvement from the last mix that I also enjoyed ... mark Edited May 25, 2021 by mark skinner 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lynn Wilson Posted May 24, 2021 Share Posted May 24, 2021 I like this mix better than the last one. Your vocal performance is very strong and emotive, and the EQ is smoother. I have no problem with the ending, but a slow fade over the final few measures might work well. All in all, very tasty! 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Paul Bush Posted May 25, 2021 Author Share Posted May 25, 2021 Thanks chaps for all your input and you`re all right , it does rumble on a bit ,originally I wanted a question an answer type Gospel Choir and it got waylaid in the heat of the night and well...and so rumbled on , I think it`ll be faded out at some later date thing is once they got a tamborine in their hand there`s no stoppin em ..cheers Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Paul Bush Posted May 26, 2021 Author Share Posted May 26, 2021 Hi , once again after every mixdown/post i think I´ve nailed it and then I listen once more and aggghhhh not what I anticipated , so I´m doing another mix sometime in the future (fade out is no problem ) but i want more guitars up in the mix and the strings at the choir ending were too loud etc etc etc cheers all Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ABull Posted May 26, 2021 Share Posted May 26, 2021 (edited) Terrific demo of a terrific song Paul -- love your vox (esp. the immediacy and passion) -- lyrics are well done -- this is very good work in that you took chances in the writing and the performance and it really paid off -- Allan. Edited May 26, 2021 by ABull 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
noynekker Posted May 28, 2021 Share Posted May 28, 2021 Paul . . . simply a well crafted song, great lyrics and vocal delivery, well inspired . . . you've got the vocals and mix sounding great in this latest mix version. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Makke Posted May 28, 2021 Share Posted May 28, 2021 Nice song. Good vocal performance voc sound. Well done record and mix. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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