anger mis management

[jack c.]

 

[Makke]

distortion on vocals fits well lyrics and ambiance ... nice job!

[Hidden Symmetry]

I like that organ & vamp on this..listening on laptop the distorted vocals are a bit hard to make out but convey an angry attitude nonetheless.

[SUPAREELS]

I think I'd like to see the words so I could follow it .. but interesting vibe ...good work

Steve

[jack c.]

thanks to all for listen/comments.ack c.

[Jesse Screed]

I know exactly what you mean.

 

[Bajan Blue]

A good track - i do agree that the distortion on the vocals is just a bit heavy for my liking - i would like to hear your vocals more they sound almost a bit David Byrne like to me, and thats a really good thing!

Cool

Nigel

 

[jack c.]

19 hours ago, jack c. said:

thanks  for listen/comments.jack c.

 

[PhonoBrainer]

Glad I caught this, nice vamp and the vocals weren't Prince lyrics but I still got a Prince vibe. Headphones made me appreciate the mix even more, nice panning!

I can't say I could make out all the lyrics, but they sounded angry good.

cheers,

-Tom

 

[Old Joad]

I liked the song, great job...

[Douglas Kirby]

That distortion on the lead vocal is wild - I did have trouble with what you're saying.  I liked the vibe of the song, especially the organ - cool track.

[jack c.]

48 minutes ago, Douglas Kirby said:

That distortion on the lead vocal is wild - I did have trouble with what you're saying.  I liked the vibe of the song, especially the organ - cool track.

 

 

9 hours ago, Old Joad said:

I liked the song, great job...

 

12 hours ago, emeraldsoul said:

Glad I caught this, nice vamp and the vocals weren't Prince lyrics but I still got a Prince vibe. Headphones made me appreciate the mix even more, nice panning!

I can't say I could make out all the lyrics, but they sounded angry good.

cheers,

-Tom

thanks for listen and thoughts.jack c.

[mark skinner]

HARD hitting vibe ,  Loved it !   With a little different vocal treatment I think you could get a great  Byrne/Bowie feel out of this one.       mark

Edited April 17, 2021 by mark skinner

[David Sprouse]

You have such a fertile imagination in the service of the music.     Have you tried jazz improv? your phrasing is spot on.

Edited April 17, 2021 by David Sprouse

[jack c.]

8 hours ago, David Sprouse said:

You have such a fertile imagination in the service of the music.     Have you tried jazz improv? your phrasing is spot on.

real nice thoughts thanks so much.for all me musical life me forte  are chords,arrangements.so doing soloing is not good for me.i do jazz genre at times.jack c.