Tips for a song that I'm making

[ceakay]

Hi, I would appreciate it if someone gave a tip on this beat I made for a song that I am going to make. It's just a quick 9 second snippet of the beat. I attached an audio file.

Edit: I forgot to mention that it is a snippet of the beat for the chorus where the singer sings (no vocals on this yet, though).

beat snippet.wav

Edited March 29, 2021 by seakay beats

[noynekker]

Ha, not a lot to go by with 9 seconds of a potential chorus, with possible vocals ! . . . but I kind of hear a chord progression, think you should bring that out more, and not so much of the lead part, which may ultimately compete with the vocal . . . but who knows, anything can work, if you can make it work.

[ceakay]

Thanks for the feedback! I know 9 secs isn't a lot, I just hardly did any work on it so far ?. I'll be sure to link the final song whenever I finish.

[jack c.]

the one ya have fits.not to many snare fills.jack c.