SPAK Posted March 21, 2019 Share Posted March 21, 2019 (edited) Your thoughts on my joining the song to a story ARE WE LOVERS ANYMORE (VID #1) I feel your warmth within sheets And smell your perfume in the air But we don't lay like we used to Are we lovers anymore? I bring you flowers in the morning You send your smiles on the wind But you don't laugh like you used to Are we lovers anymore I spend each hour thinking of you I wonder what your doing now I've tried so hard to ask this question Are we lovers anymore Inst The world I live in feels so lonely 'Cause it's slowly broke my heart I'd move the heavens and the earth to find the answer Why we ain't lovers anymore I feel your warmth within these sheets I smell your perfume on the air But we don't make love like we used to No, we ain't lovers anymore Oh, we ain't lovers anymore Oh, we ain't lovers anymore ...Insert other media Edited March 21, 2019 by SPAK Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
amiller Posted March 21, 2019 Share Posted March 21, 2019 Beautifully sad. Great job! 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SPAK Posted March 21, 2019 Author Share Posted March 21, 2019 Many thanks for listening Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
InstrEd Posted March 21, 2019 Share Posted March 21, 2019 Nice! I liked the touch of the BYE sign towards the end of the song. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
garybrun Posted March 21, 2019 Share Posted March 21, 2019 love it! 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lynn Wilson Posted March 21, 2019 Share Posted March 21, 2019 Great, you put a video to one of my favorite songs! I've listened to this quite a bit, and plan to continue. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SPAK Posted March 22, 2019 Author Share Posted March 22, 2019 11 hours ago, Lynn said: Great, you put a video to one of my favorite songs! I've listened to this quite a bit, and plan to continue. It's 'cause of your comment Lynn so when it goes viral your to blame LOL? ATB Steve Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Douglas Kirby Posted March 24, 2019 Share Posted March 24, 2019 First off - I liked your vocal - fit the song well. The song is good - nice ballad. The mix sounded good to my ears. Nice job on the lyrics - I enjoyed the listen. Once crit - it ends too abruptly - it needed a longer fade. Thanks for posting. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SPAK Posted March 24, 2019 Author Share Posted March 24, 2019 (edited) 3 hours ago, Douglas Kirby said: First off - I liked your vocal - fit the song well. The song is good - nice ballad. The mix sounded good to my ears. Nice job on the lyrics - I enjoyed the listen. Once crit - it ends too abruptly - it needed a longer fade. Thanks for posting. Thanks for listening ... again (Feb 24), as you know I posted this as just a song which has the longer ending but then in doing the YT video I cut the fad shorter ... good obs on your part, maybe I should have left it as the longer version. You can still hear the 'song only' further on down the hit list.? ATB Steve Edited March 24, 2019 by SPAK Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bjornpdx Posted March 24, 2019 Share Posted March 24, 2019 Steve A video or a slide show can make a song more engaging but I think this song works better by itself. A video would need to be more of a story with the same couple beginning to end. Just my opinion as always. Lovely song though! I think you're going to corner the sad and wistful song market very soon now. ? 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
freddy j Posted March 24, 2019 Share Posted March 24, 2019 I remember my reaction to this song when you posted it without the video. This beautiful song really captured me. There was nothing about it that I didn't like -- vocals, instrumentation, lyrics, mix, etc. The video really enhances visually a beautiful aural work!!!! 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SPAK Posted March 25, 2019 Author Share Posted March 25, 2019 On 3/24/2019 at 5:45 PM, bjornpdx said: Steve A video or a slide show can make a song more engaging but I think this song works better by itself. A video would need to be more of a story with the same couple beginning to end. Just my opinion as always. Lovely song though! I think you're going to corner the sad and wistful song market very soon now. ? You are of course right ... and I would love to get a couple of actors to do this (I asked the wife ... tin hat attached ... and I left her as quick as poss !) but just too expensive so I came up with this You opinion is extremely important and I do agree ..but we all struggle with our dreams ... All the best Steve Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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