Lynn Wilson Posted August 26, 2020 Author Share Posted August 26, 2020 On 8/25/2020 at 9:44 PM, Jesse Screed said: Lynn, this works for me, nasty nuff said be careful Expand Thank you very much, Jesse! This works for me, too. Stay safe On 8/25/2020 at 10:29 PM, Hidden Symmetry said: Vocals were slightly Van Vliet'ish ! enjoyed it. Expand That's the first I've ever heard of Van Vliet, had to google him. I'm happy to please! On 8/26/2020 at 1:13 PM, Sabby Brown said: Buggered me brain up ... I really couldn't understand the rhythm at all ... if Zappa saw my face he's blow smoke in the air and ask who my mother was ...and then I see Jesse's comment .. .far too clever for my old brain .. but boy... you play that ol'gitar well S Expand Sabby, you're not alone. This whole shebang started with that crazy guitar riff at the intro. Sometimes my body knows more than my brain. Thanks for your reply, as always! 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Amicus717 Posted August 27, 2020 Share Posted August 27, 2020 This is great - the 7/8 time works really well (and after a few bars begins to feel quite natural), and the vocal/instrumental work is really good. Nice mix, too. Good stuff all around. Rob 1 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lynn Wilson Posted August 30, 2020 Author Share Posted August 30, 2020 On 8/27/2020 at 7:02 PM, Amicus717 said: This is great - the 7/8 time works really well (and after a few bars begins to feel quite natural), and the vocal/instrumental work is really good. Nice mix, too. Good stuff all around. Rob Expand Thank you so much, Rob! Couldn't have done it without artificial intelligence. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Makke Posted September 3, 2020 Share Posted September 3, 2020 Good job. Song has a good structure, rhythm and melody lines works well together. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jwnicholson78 Posted September 4, 2020 Share Posted September 4, 2020 I've always liked oddball time signatures. Well done holding it together and maintaining the groove. That's tricky. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lynn Wilson Posted September 4, 2020 Author Share Posted September 4, 2020 On 9/3/2020 at 10:26 AM, Makke said: Good job. Song has a good structure, rhythm and melody lines works well together. Expand On 9/4/2020 at 12:35 AM, jwnicholson78 said: I've always liked oddball time signatures. Well done holding it together and maintaining the groove. That's tricky. Expand I'd like to thank each of you for your kind words! I'm happy to hear that it works for others, and I'll keep experimenting with different time signatures. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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