Douglas Kirby Posted February 18, 2019 Share Posted February 18, 2019 This is the eighth track on my 2018 album "Incessant Absurdity". Any comments and critiques are welcome and thanks for listening. Here it is: https://www.soundclick.com/html5/v4/player.cfm?songID=13760592 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kloon Posted February 19, 2019 Share Posted February 19, 2019 Great song, enjoyed it alot. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PhonoBrainer Posted February 19, 2019 Share Posted February 19, 2019 If you listen in the first minute, I think the snare is coming in just a hair after the guitar strum. I'd vote for the drums louder on this one, particularly the snare. Great concept, great voice, awesome guitar tones, drums are great (tasteful ride and those fills), cool lyrics, nice bgv's . . . I could see chilling out to this kickin back on the beach after a full day's surfing, a west coast sunset. And I don't even surf. great job (again)! cheers, -Tom Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Douglas Kirby Posted February 21, 2019 Author Share Posted February 21, 2019 kloon - Thank you very much for listening. emeraldsoul - Thanks for your comments and critiques. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
chuckebaby Posted February 21, 2019 Share Posted February 21, 2019 Im guessing Telecaster through a tweed amp sim with reverb ? Liked this a lot, The mix is good (cymbals are a little on the loud side). On 2/19/2019 at 12:01 AM, emeraldsoul said: If you listen in the first minute, I think the snare is coming in just a hair after the guitar strum. I hear the same with Cymbals not lining up with the kick on the down beats. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
freddy j Posted February 21, 2019 Share Posted February 21, 2019 This is a really "catchy" song. It all fits together to make for and interesting song with some good lyrics. I don't really know why but it reminds me (in a slight way) of some of Lou Reed's stuff. Nice one. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Douglas Kirby Posted February 24, 2019 Author Share Posted February 24, 2019 Chuck E Baby - Thanks for your comments and for listening. That is a Strat through a tweed amp sim with reverb (TH3). Good ears there. freddy j - Thanks for your comments and for listening. A Lou Reed comparison sounds cool to me. Thanks for complimenting me on the lyrics - when I start writing lyrics for a song, I never know what's going to come of it - a bit of an adventure. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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