Feedback on text "wash away"

[illerill]

Hey guys,

Picking up  music again after almost 5 years offs. It has always been an emotional rollercoaster. Anyway, before recording I wanted to make sure everything is as it should textwise. English is not my mother tounge and I have experience with noticing grammatical errors etc after song is recorded, mixed and master which I would like to avoid this time around.

So here's a piece I was planning to record this weekend; Wash away

Verse 1.

It was a good time, it was a good life
I had it all planned, never would I
Fall and flee, had it all in reach

(see)

I was the king I, not an obstacle
Not a thing I, was unstoppable                 
All was great, now all has changed 

Intro to chorus.

Cuz I don't know, where I should go
All I know is this feeling
I seem okay, but I'm not great                
Every day oh, I'm dreaming

Chorus.

I just wanna be clear
I don't wanna be here
I don't wanna feel fear
I just wanna see hear
Touch the waves
Pain, pain wash away (x2)

Verse 2.

Been a long search, on a brief trip
Taken wrong turns, often beefing            
With myself, tell me is this my hell?

(so)

Many dumb words, some are unheard
I've been told I'm, not a songbird
I've believed, this evil guy in me

Intro to chorus.

Now I don't know, where I should go
All I know is this feeling
I seem okay, but I'm not great                
Every day oh, I'm dreaming

Chorus.

I just wanna be clear
I don't wanna be here
I don't wanna feel fear
I just wanna see hear
Touch the waves
Pain, pain wash away (x2)

Verse 3.

Is it worthless? Or is this my shot?
Such a circus, I know that I've got
Much to give, the strongest lust to live

(But) 

Is it too late? Or is it today?
I start walking, on my true way
Step by step so I can get som rest

Intro to chorus.

Cuz I do know where I should go
Yet all I hold is this feeling
I seem okay but I'm not great                 
Every day oh, I'm dreaming

Chorus.

I just wanna be clear
I don't wanna be here
I don't wanna feel fear
I just wanna see hear
Touch the waves
Pain, pain wash away (x2)

[David Sprouse]

Beautiful!  Can't wait to hear the SONG!

[illerill]

Thanks guys! Will keep you posted