fallen star

[thegaltieribrothers]

Hi geeare1,

Thanks for listening and your kind comments, glad you like the Outro.

Hi Jesse,

You said it all man, thanks for taking the time to listen and comment.

Thank you both for making this fallen star glimmer once more.

Best Wishes,

paul

[noynekker]

Nicely done . . . yes, bittersweet lyrics, and those silent breaks in the 3rd verse are effective. (Now I want to try that, lol) I especially like the mellow lead guitar sound which suits the piece very well. The vocals are well recorded, and I like how they are wide in the mix, you never lose them as a listener. Also, from a songwriting point of view, you could easily have just faded out on a chorus . . . but you changed it up with some unanticipated interest . . . enough, that I knew it was ending, but a touch of unpredictable, nice.

 

Edited March 16, 2020 by noynekker

[thegaltieribrothers]

Hi noynekker,

Thanks for your kind comments and having a listen.

Glad you like the guitar sound as well.

Regards

paul