Keith Wilby

Looking for comments, suggestions, critiques etc. I'm not sure about the overall structure TBH. https://www.bandlab.com/post/f60acd77-b955-f011-8f7c-6045bd3174c3

To me it's part of the tone. If no-one else picks up on it then it's obviously my old ears 😁

I agree with @mark skinner about your voice, there's some brilliant singing on this. Very minor crits: some of the drum fills seems a little loud to me, and also the lead guitar has a bit of a harsh tone to my ears. But overall I like this very much, one to be proud of 👍

Great upbeat and fun song. Mix sounds great to me.

Fantastic professional job, well done 👍

I often dream about loved ones who've passed away and I find it a very pleasant experience since you effectively get to spend some more time with them. This is the premise of this song. One of my sons wrote the basic tune and plays acoustic guitar on it, the rest of it is me including the lyrics. Crits and comments welcomed as always. https://www.bandlab.com/revisions/e840f9bd-4509-f011-aaa7-0022484892d6?sharedKey=BrROtXCT6kGLCnx_RcKPtw

Hope you're well too, thanks for listening 👍🙂

Yes I think that's spot on now 👍

It's not my cup of tea but I can appreciate why others would like it and the effort that went into it. My only crit would be that the tambourine is too loud. I found it a tad irritating TBH. Otherwise a job well done.

Finished this project now. I decided to add a bit of punch by adding an expletive and changing "Perry Como" to "Yoko Ono" 🤣 https://www.bandlab.com/post/45ae2079-15ea-ef11-88f6-6045bd3473c0

Tried a few different methods of deverb but they all took too much away unfortunately. Thanks for the suggestion though 🙂

Hi all. This song is written and sung by my pal and (then) bandmate Rob Rigby. The instruments and backing vocals are by me. Rob passed away many years ago. I'd always wanted to do a better version of his song than our band did (the guy on keyboards couldn't really play and the drummer raced like Mo Farah) but I could never sing it well enough, so this vocal is (mostly) from the terrible quality 1986 video recording here. Not the best quality audio but still better than me singing it. Rob's on the LH Washburn, the dopey looking bassist is me 😁 Comments and suggestions welcomed as always.

My 70s throwback "driving home" song is finished now. I think. I've put some "urgency" into the singing on the later verses ( this guy gets more and more desperate to get home 🤣), and various other (hopefully) improvements. Comment welcomed as always. https://www.bandlab.com/revisions/990955f4-44da-ef11-88f6-6045bd3473c0?sharedKey=ZhaY9hrn9keX1k60mcVmWg

No offence intended but, I don't think you'll get much in the way of responses by posting a new link every time you make a minor tweak to a song. Better IMO to get a song to a stage where it's already achieved a number of milestones and then ask for critiques. Just my 2p worth 🙂

Jeez, hope you're OK. To my ears, it's Motown meets the Travelling Wilburys. Very enjoyable. A few timing issues here and there but then it kinda adds to the charm. Good lyrics. After decades of listening to Peter Gabriel it's refreshing to hear frivolous lyrics 👍