Keith Wilby

My 70s throwback "driving home" song is finished now. I think. I've put some "urgency" into the singing on the later verses ( this guy gets more and more desperate to get home 🤣), and various other (hopefully) improvements. Comment welcomed as always. https://www.bandlab.com/revisions/990955f4-44da-ef11-88f6-6045bd3473c0?sharedKey=ZhaY9hrn9keX1k60mcVmWg

No offence intended but, I don't think you'll get much in the way of responses by posting a new link every time you make a minor tweak to a song. Better IMO to get a song to a stage where it's already achieved a number of milestones and then ask for critiques. Just my 2p worth 🙂

Jeez, hope you're OK. To my ears, it's Motown meets the Travelling Wilburys. Very enjoyable. A few timing issues here and there but then it kinda adds to the charm. Good lyrics. After decades of listening to Peter Gabriel it's refreshing to hear frivolous lyrics 👍

I like old school 😁

Yeah "Led Zep sings ..." made me chuckle 🙂

This is a bit of a 70s throwback in terms of duration and the shameless solo in the middle. It's one of those "driving through the night to get home to my woman" kind of themes. I hope it's not too long that you doze off. Comments and critiques welcomed as always. https://www.bandlab.com/post/f805bbf1-a5d5-ef11-88cd-000d3aa44d1c

I did, yes, and it can work very well.

I'll certainly give that a go 👍

Nothing in the way of pitch correction, I could properly sing back then 🤣 Duly noted, will revisit, thanks @timboalogo

Yes indeed. The drumming was in aid of testing the (then) new Strawberry Studios in Manchester and they ended up turning it into a hit. Many thanks.

Written in the 1980s when I was in my 20s. I'd always wanted to write the opposite of a love song and this is what I came up with. The vocal is from the 80s, everything else is new. Comments appreciated. It's a bit long ... sorry 😳 https://www.bandlab.com/post/270564f2-dac9-ef11-88cd-6045bd345b20

That's very very nice indeed. Way out of the spectrum of what I normally do so I'm not qualified to suggest anything, but keep on it, it'll be a great track.

Tongue in cheek little ditty here. Modelled the drums on "Neanderthal Man" by Hotlegs (early 70s hit probably only in UK). https://www.bandlab.com/revisions/6b121511-2bc5-ef11-88cd-6045bd345b20?sharedKey=ZsT0CeT6hUGy2Vx5D1vcHQ Comments welcome as always.

I'd be fascinated to know how you did that.

@crazy sniffable I had a similar issue. Seems to pick this information up from the project notes in the browser.