I think I've de-Purpled this now but I've added a dash of Bad Co just for good measure. Thanks for your patience on this one 🤭
https://www.bandlab.com/revisions/57f6f472-925d-f011-8dc9-6045bd38076d?sharedKey=EbkLwYogKUWe4Gn55xEhrQ
Ah crap it does doesn't it? It even starts with a chattering hi-hat. In my defence, I'd never heard it before but I hate it when it happens. Thanks for the heads up.
What an epic song that is. Very nice work indeed. If I may have one very minor comment, to me it seems like the vocals are sitting on top of the rest of the mix in the first verse. Everything evens out after that. Certainly one to be proud of. I struggle with lyrics, I think these will provide some inspiration 🙂
Looking for comments, suggestions, critiques etc. I'm not sure about the overall structure TBH.
https://www.bandlab.com/post/f60acd77-b955-f011-8f7c-6045bd3174c3
I agree with @mark skinner about your voice, there's some brilliant singing on this. Very minor crits: some of the drum fills seems a little loud to me, and also the lead guitar has a bit of a harsh tone to my ears. But overall I like this very much, one to be proud of 👍
I often dream about loved ones who've passed away and I find it a very pleasant experience since you effectively get to spend some more time with them. This is the premise of this song. One of my sons wrote the basic tune and plays acoustic guitar on it, the rest of it is me including the lyrics.
Crits and comments welcomed as always.
https://www.bandlab.com/revisions/e840f9bd-4509-f011-aaa7-0022484892d6?sharedKey=BrROtXCT6kGLCnx_RcKPtw
It's not my cup of tea but I can appreciate why others would like it and the effort that went into it. My only crit would be that the tambourine is too loud. I found it a tad irritating TBH. Otherwise a job well done.