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Hi Guys, I know most of the audience here, is English speaking, but here is an Urdu song, I am working on, just wanted to get some feedback from my musician friends here ... after all “music and melody” transcends languages and cultures. let me know what you guys think? Amad AKA PCODE

this was really good, very relaxing .... and love the vocals...

Nice vocals, music seems a little soft, but good vocals...

Good work batsbrew!

Karaoke version of the song I posted earlier. https://youtu.be/4j220zTaWMA

Thanks for listening bjornpdx and thanks for feedback...

Hi garybrun, thanks for listening and thanks for the feedback...

The idea behind the music was to commune between mellow sounding instruments and angry sounding electric guitars... let me know what you guys think.... and be gentle LOL :) https://youtu.be/l2aC9U5TyJ4

? Thanks for listening Amicus717, and thanks for the feedback. I live with an angel ;) I made this music for her.

Wookiee: Thanks for listening, in my other composition I switch things a lot (ADD), but for this soundscape I wanted, it, to be somewhat consistent in keeping the theme. BTW how do you like your i7 8700K? as far as running soft-synths, i have an i7 7700K do you think it's worth an upgrade? Gary: Thanks for an attentive ear, and for detailed feedback, I appreciate it. Thanks for listening and thanks for the feedback. Not sure why it sounds off key, it's all done with same scale G Major, at 440 Hz tuning... Thanks for Feedback...

Nice vocals, clean pro mix as well...

Love the vocals, mix is clean as well... good work!

Thanks for listening garybrun, and thanks for the feedback, I appreciate it .

thegaltieribrothers: Thanks for listening and thanks for the feedback...

let me know what you guys think....

bjornpdx: Thanks for listening, reason I added a high contrast "synth sound" was to wake the listener up, and I thought it was slightly out of the box thing to do... 53mph: This song was done using Cubase 10 Pro, kontakt 6 and Halion Sonic Synths.... I switch between SONAR and Cubase. I will check it out, Thanks... Thanks for listening Wookiee

I am glad you like it, emeraldsoul :)

Nice song, vocals sound good, and accompanying track is on point, it works!

Nice song, I like the bass sound, and the lyrics ... good work!

emeraldsoul: here is some translation I did for you, it kinda fails to keep it's rhyming, and it's true essence, as languages are so different... Urdu was created as a poetic language, by the Mughal Empire, (https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Mughal_Empire) my Urdu is not all that great, but here is an attempt ... Urdu: aaj din bhar bekaar tha English: today was ineffectual day Urdu: ajib si uljhan ka shikaar tha English: For I was in odd confusion Urdu: mujhe ab satao naa English: Please don’t distress me any more Urdu: main aaj chup hoon rulao naa English: I am silent, don’t make me cry Urdu: jeeu main kaise batao naa English: How am I to live, without you Urdu: baahar hai naa aaram naa ghar me chain English: There is no balance, inside or outside Urdu: kaisa kare jaadu mujhpe tere nain English: For I am mesmerized by your eyes Urdu: tune mujhse mujhko hi chheen liya English: you have stolen, I, from I Urdu: teri har adaa ne mujhko pagal kiya English: Your every foible is driving me crazy Urdu: ab aur mujhko satao naa English: Don’t cause any more sorrow Urdu: main aaj chup hoon rulao naa English: Please don’t distress me any more Thanks for listening Paul ....

An old Urdu song made new (in E major) let me know what you guys think? Thanks...