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Great clarity in this mix. I like the panning on the 2 acoustic guitar tracks. I'm getting a Paul McCartney/Wings vibe from this track. Nicely done.

 

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Mix clarity is great, very sparkly but that bass fills the down low just great.  I hear Imogen Heap. So that's sort of like Paul McCartney  :)  You have a good voice and the ear candy is way good. Nice mix of the modern with the acoustic guitars.

Got any English lyrics? My Urdu is sadly non-existent.

 

cheers,

-Tom

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emeraldsoul: here is some translation I did for you, it kinda fails to keep it's rhyming, and it's true essence, as languages are so different... 

Urdu was created as a poetic language, by the Mughal Empire, (https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Mughal_Empire)  
my Urdu is not all that great, but here is an attempt ... :)

Urdu: aaj din bhar bekaar tha
English: today was ineffectual day

Urdu: ajib si uljhan ka shikaar tha
English: For I was in odd confusion  

Urdu: mujhe ab satao naa
English: Please don’t distress me any more

Urdu: main aaj chup hoon rulao naa
English: I am silent, don’t make me cry

Urdu: jeeu main kaise batao naa
English: How am I to live, without you

Urdu: baahar hai naa aaram naa ghar me chain
English: There is no balance, inside or outside

Urdu: kaisa kare jaadu mujhpe tere nain
English: For I am mesmerized by your eyes

Urdu: tune mujhse mujhko hi chheen liya
English: you have stolen, I, from I

Urdu: teri har adaa ne mujhko pagal kiya
English: Your every foible is driving me crazy

Urdu: ab aur mujhko satao naa
English: Don’t cause any more sorrow

Urdu: main aaj chup hoon rulao naa
English: Please don’t distress me any more

Thanks for listening Paul ....

 

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Sweet, but not to sure about it, didn't seem to 'hold me' but the mix felt right for the work ... good post

SPAK

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I like this song a lot.  Bit of a reggae thing going on in there.  Really good vocal (great reverb too) which makes me not care so much that I don't understand the lyrics. The synth at 2:27 didn't work for me - seemed like a departure from the laid back mood of the rest of the song.

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Great mixing and mastering.  Slightly heavy on the reverb for my tasts, but I know the genre you're working in, and it's spot on.

 Was this all done in Cakewalk?

I probably shouldn't be promoting other sites, but I think you should get over to HitRecord.org and start collaborating on projects there.  This is just the type of sound they would go for in their collabs. 

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11 hours ago, bjornpdx said:

I like this song a lot.  Bit of a reggae thing going on in there.  Really good vocal (great reverb too) which makes me not care so much that I don't understand the lyrics. The synth at 2:27 didn't work for me - seemed like a departure from the laid back mood of the rest of the song.

bjornpdx: Thanks for listening, reason I added a high contrast "synth sound" was to wake the listener up, and I thought it was slightly out of the box thing to do...

 

7 hours ago, 53mph said:

Great mixing and mastering.  Slightly heavy on the reverb for my tasts, but I know the genre you're working in, and it's spot on.

 Was this all done in Cakewalk?

I probably shouldn't be promoting other sites, but I think you should get over to HitRecord.org and start collaborating on projects there.  This is just the type of sound they would go for in their collabs. 

53mph: This song was done using Cubase 10 Pro, kontakt 6  and Halion Sonic Synths.... 

I switch between SONAR and Cubase.

7 hours ago, 53mph said:

HitRecord.org

I will check it out, Thanks...

  

22 hours ago, Wookiee said:

Only listening on my DT 100 cans but the mix is very clear on them, thanks for sharing.

Thanks for listening Wookiee :)

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Very clear mix,
Reminds me of  Norwegian artist Morten Harkett from the 80's group Ah-Ha.
His music is very similar. 
I enjoyed the reverb and thought it was well done and the mix was wide
Nice mixture of different electronic instruments

I can hear thereverb tails well on my Focal monitors.

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Super mix on this song!!  There is something about the melody of this song that is really attractive, and the vocal presentation fits perfectly.

Nice One!!!

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