Beagle 56 Posted February 8, 2019 Hey Paul - beautiful song! I agree the vocal could use some work. keep up the good work, tho, guys, this is a really great sounding song! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
thegaltieribrothers 173 Posted February 12, 2019 Hi Beagle, Thanks for your comments and for listening, it is really appreciated. regards paul Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
SteenE 16 Posted February 12, 2019 Very pretty song and beautiful arrangement. A little more variation between the verses maybe ? Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
thegaltieribrothers 173 Posted February 14, 2019 Hi SoundRegion, Thanks for taking the time to listen and comment, it is really appreciated. regards paul Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Johnbee58 238 Posted February 14, 2019 So sorry I didn't get to this sooner. I thought I did already have a listen but I guess I did not. Anyway, loving the acoustic guitar work. Beautiful. It complements everything else in the song so well, including your voice. Very nice! Also loving the bells and string pad. Very pretty song. 😀John B. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
thegaltieribrothers 173 Posted February 15, 2019 Hi John, Thanks for listening and your kind comments, glad you like the song. regards paul Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
vilovilo 16 Posted February 25, 2019 (edited) Hello, listening to this tune on an IPad ( shame on me) so no way to give any technical point of view. The song is cool and goes quite in a flowing moove ,cool time spent listening to it ( I will go back to it on a more decent device...) As others mentionned,there is a thing in the vocal part ,according to me it is not the tone ,what I hear is in tune and you manage the emotional expression quite well , from where I am ,maybe it is something related with rythm ,again for me and with out any proficiency I could revendicate ,it seems you don't manage your voice the same way as if it was a guitar or a violin or whatever instrument and it seems you let it " float " a tiny bit . Maybe taking the voice part the same way you would approach an instrumental part could help. I don't know. Hope to contribute in a way. Cheers. Olivier Edited February 25, 2019 by vilovilo Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
thegaltieribrothers 173 Posted February 26, 2019 Hi Olivier, Thanks for your comments and for listening, it is really appreciated. regards paul Share this post Link to post Share on other sites