SOS (Slave Of State)

[Harry C. 7]

Even if my previous song was ignored, (  War No More    )

maybe this one is better:

We are all slaves of our states

I would like to know what you think about the production (mix / master) of this song.

Cheers

[Wookiee 204]

Mix sounds OK here, though there does not feel like any punch in the dynamics and I am not sure the bass guitar is translating very well either.

Thanks for sharing.

[thegaltieribrothers 64]

Hi Harry,

Sock it to the man my friend.

Nice song + great video, loved the guitar solo.

Thanks for sharing.

Good Job!

regards

paul

[Harry C. 7]

Thank you Paul and Wookie for listening and answers.

[SPAK 83]

It's a song in the making. I think it needs a bit of love on the dynamics and mixing as it seems to lack power which I think work like this needs but all good 'ish.

 

[emeraldsoul 253]

I didn't think the mix was too bad at all. For me, it is clear up top, and has enough "power" in the right places. But, this isn't my home-turf genre, so the true metalheads might see it differently.

So, if you want,

fight the power.

 

Meanwhile, the video - that's a good effort there! Appreciate the live shots and stuff. The musicians seem to convey the message, although it's not super subtle. My observation for improvement? The lead singer needs a better camera to equal that of the other musician's. Looks like he's shot with the back-up camera on a Ford Explorer, but the rest of them look crisp, HD, with a green screen to boot. If you are going to all this trouble (and it does look good) get the lead singer something more than a webcam, if possible.

 

Of all of your stuff that I've heard so far, I like this one the best I think. Nice job to all.

 

-Tom

 

 

[daryl1968 104]

good song and mix Harry. I also enjoyed the video - it must have taken a lot of work.

[bjornpdx 122]

Harry

You have a great voice for the genre. I thought the mix was good but the bass could come up a bit. I've said it before: I like seeing these older fellows rocking out.

[Harry C. 7]

Thank you SPAK for listening and Tom thanks for being so detailed.
Yes, in fact it looks as if the singer had taken the shot with a back-up camera on a vehicle, LOL.
Unfortunately, he has no way to make better video recordings at the moment, so we have to make the best of it. But it is primarily about the song i think, the video should support only the message a little bit.

[Harry C. 7]

@ bjonrn : Hello bjornpdx, yes we are old fellows and can't stop rocking . Thank you for listening.

@ daryl: Thank you for listening and yes it has taken a lot of time. I have nothing else to do :)

[David Sprouse 23]

I agree, everyone works for CIA whether they no it or not. :D:D