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Very nice track and vocal.
Clear mix.

I would like to hear a little more energy and variation in the drum track.
God is watching you  😉

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I like the lyric meaning.  I also think a little more drum variation would add to the song.

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Lyrics sure work and it's a catchy song. I'd vote for less reverb on the snare, and a little louder kick/snare. Your hi hat seems about right. And other than the intro, for your panned acoustic arpeggios, they could come down just a bit in volume.

 

Have fun with it, it's a nice one.

cheers,

-Tom

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Hi Gary,

Thanks for listening and for your advice on the drum track.

Hi AMiller,

Thanks for listening and your note on the drums.

Hi Tom,

Thanks for listening and your comments + your note on the guitar arpeggios.

Thank you all for listening and commenting its is greatly appreciated.

regards

paul

 

 

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Paul, you've done a good job on this tune!  I always enjoy your songs, and you keep a steady flow of them coming.  You've received some good advice above, but the main thing is:  you're getting the job done!

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Hi, Paul,

It's always good to hear a new song from you!  Nice work on this pleasant sounding, very catchy pop rocker!😀

Excellent vocals and musical performances, great song message, and the mix sounds clean and wide with nice instrument separation and a fresh sounding overall vibe!👍

Wonderful job, my friend, have a great week!
Bob

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Paul
I like the voc and the lyrics very much. The guitar accompaniment is great. Good job!

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Hi Lynn,

Thanks for your kind words and for listening.

Hi Bob,

Thanks for listening to my 'pop rocker' and for your kind comments.

Hi Bjorn,

Glad you like the guitar accompaniment and lyrics.

Thank you all for listening and your kind comments they are really appreciated.

regards

paul

 

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Posted (edited)

Good tune. Enjoyed listening.

Drums do need some variation. A roll here and there with some splash. Maybe switch to a ride for the outro. Not a whole lot, just a little would go a long way.

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nice tune, I like the lyrics, and the acoustic guitar was a nice touch.

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This is another emotional song that you have shared with us and I think that your vocals really convey the message and intent of the lyrics.  To me this song is particularly interesting because while it is an emotional and introspective song the melody has a bit of a light feel to it.  I find that this give the song a very attractive and "pop" feel.

Well done my friend!

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Hi Grem,

Thanks for the advice on the drums and for listening.

Hi Joad,

Thanks for listening, glad you liked the lyrics and guitar.

Hi Freddy,

Thank you for your comments and for listening.

Thank you all for listening and your kind comments they are really appreciated.

regards

paul

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Was that a wah-wah on an acoustic for the lead lick - if it was, that was wild - it works really well. Quality song and composition - I enjoyed the listen.

Nicely done.

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Hey bros, nice song, well done, as said by others ,the drums are a bit monotenous. Imho ;)

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Last time I heard an introduction with that sound was when our rhythm guitars tried out a new FX peddle I had built for him.

Pleasant enough tune, drums do get a little monotonous as noted above.  Mix overall nice and clear. 

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