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Nice I like it!! Really mellow tune well done. I like your vocals. (Listening to Mr Together).

I like the pop feel of this song. Subject could be a funny one, or a sad one. Depends on how you take it. At first I thought it was funny. But then as I listened to it again, I thought maybe she was calling and letting the guy know she's getting married in the hope that he would stop her. And the guy is sitting there trying to convince himself that she's better off with the other guy.

 

But then again, it could just be  a simple pop song!! : ) I wouldn't change anything with it. I liked it as it is.

 

[edit] Harvey Family surprised the h**l out of me! Dat's a good one there.

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Hey!  This isn't the song I reviewed earlier.  What the hell?

🙂

OK.  Listened to the new one.  Lovely tune.  The solo instrument sounds very effective.  Sad lyrics. Overall nice ballad. 

I like your style.  You remind me of a hero of mine-Dan Fogelberg.

🙂John B

 

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Hi, Allan,

You've got a really pleasant sounding pop song here, with excellent songwriting and lyrics, great instrumental performances, and fantastic vocals and harmonies!😀

I agree with Joad, and I bet this could be a great mainstream radio pop track.👍

Nice work, buddy, have a good one!

Bob

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