ABull 89 Posted June 30, 2019 (edited) uuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu Edited July 8, 2019 by ABull 2 1 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
ABull 89 Posted June 30, 2019 (edited) 7-4-2019 Hey fellas -- thanks for listening and posting comments -- much appreciated. ~~Allan Edited July 4, 2019 by ABull Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Grem 2,409 Posted June 30, 2019 (edited) Nice I like it!! Really mellow tune well done. I like your vocals. (Listening to Mr Together). I like the pop feel of this song. Subject could be a funny one, or a sad one. Depends on how you take it. At first I thought it was funny. But then as I listened to it again, I thought maybe she was calling and letting the guy know she's getting married in the hope that he would stop her. And the guy is sitting there trying to convince himself that she's better off with the other guy. But then again, it could just be a simple pop song!! : ) I wouldn't change anything with it. I liked it as it is. [edit] Harvey Family surprised the h**l out of me! Dat's a good one there. Edited June 30, 2019 by Grem Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Johnbee58 229 Posted July 1, 2019 (edited) Hey! This isn't the song I reviewed earlier. What the hell? 🙂 OK. Listened to the new one. Lovely tune. The solo instrument sounds very effective. Sad lyrics. Overall nice ballad. I like your style. You remind me of a hero of mine-Dan Fogelberg. 🙂John B Edited July 1, 2019 by Johnbee58 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
amiller 186 Posted July 1, 2019 I like the bittersweet lyrics. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Myriad Rocker 36 Posted July 1, 2019 Really dig the vocal at 0:58. Very nice touch. Really great track, I enjoyed it. The vocal seemed a touch too forward at the beginning, but settled in nicely as it got into it. Might have just been me. Nice playing! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Old Joad 686 Posted July 1, 2019 This song should be playing 24 hours a day on a jukebox in a smoky bar somewhere on the bayou. this is a dark, emotional ballad. whats not to like? I hope you post more songs here... Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Bob Oister 101 Posted July 3, 2019 Hi, Allan, You've got a really pleasant sounding pop song here, with excellent songwriting and lyrics, great instrumental performances, and fantastic vocals and harmonies!😀 I agree with Joad, and I bet this could be a great mainstream radio pop track.👍 Nice work, buddy, have a good one! Bob Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
thegaltieribrothers 173 Posted July 5, 2019 Hi Allan, Nice song and good arrangement. Thanks for sharing. Good Job! regards paul Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
