Compromise-Original

[Johnbee58 335]

No singing robots here.  Just me. 🙂

Like it, love it or hate it. ☺️

https://www.soundclick.com/music/songInfo.cfm?songID=14397716

😀John B

Edited May 23 by Johnbee58

[noynekker 378]

Hi John . . . I'm a liker of this one ! So many interesting moments along the way, great instrumental surprises . . . I actually found this very theatrical in it's presentation, like something you would hear in a musical stage production.

[Wookiee 1,778]

As noynekker noes this is much more a musical theatre piece, mix sound fair here on my Events.  That lead synths sounds just tad to forward at the 2;18 point woudl be my only observation.

[mark skinner 669]

Great job on the vocals ! Loved the song. The first time thru I thought they were a little dry. Second listen I got it. Enjoyed it ..  mark

[Johnbee58 335]

@mark skinnerThanks for listening, Mark.😃

@Wookiee & @noynekker Thanks for your input.  "Broadway Meets Bowen".  Cool!  Wook, you're right about that synth so I brought it down  and panned it from 4 o'clock to 2 o' clock to spread it out a bit.  I also put a buss compressor on the Master.  Seems to hold everything together better.

🙂John B

Edited May 23 by Johnbee58

[Jesse Screed 651]

23 hours ago, Johnbee58 said:

No singing robots here.  Just me. 🙂

Like it, love it or hate it. ☺️

https://www.soundclick.com/music/songInfo.cfm?songID=14397716

😀John B

at first it sounded like you were a bit hesitant

but then you stepped into yourself

nobody will hear the truth until you express it

Edited May 23 by Jesse Screed

[bjornpdx 1,030]

I'm really liking the melody and lyrics John. You have a strong vocal range that handled the highs and lows of the song very well.
-Bjorn

[Johnbee58 335]

@Jesse Screed & @bjornpdx, Thanks for listening and your feedback.

😀John B

[KSband 326]

Lot's of interesting changes in there and very good playing too.

[Johnbee58 335]

21 hours ago, KSband said:

Lot's of interesting changes in there and very good playing too.

Thanks for listening, @KSband

😃John B

[freddy j 615]

Hi John  glad to see you back on the forum!  This a nice reflective song and the performance and mix sound good.  I like that pause around 1:40 and the bass line that follows.  Very nice work indeed!

[Johnbee58 335]

20 hours ago, freddy j said:

Hi John  glad to see you back on the forum!  This a nice reflective song and the performance and mix sound good.  I like that pause around 1:40 and the bass line that follows.  Very nice work indeed!

Thank you, Mr. Bluesman!!😉

😀John B.

[Douglas Kirby 791]

Nice job - I thought your vocal stood out on this one.  This had a 70's light rock vibe to me.  I really liked that synth after the breakdown section.

Regarding the mix - well done.

[Johnbee58 335]

2 hours ago, Douglas Kirby said:

Nice job - I thought your vocal stood out on this one.  This had a 70's light rock vibe to me.  I really liked that synth after the breakdown section.

Regarding the mix - well done.

Thanks for listening, Doug 😀.

😀John B

[Bapu 5,092]

John, I listened to this the other day and I thought I commented, but obviously not.

This is def something different for you. Good job.

[Bajan Blue 1,090]

On 5/22/2022 at 10:56 PM, noynekker said:

Hi John . . . I'm a liker of this one ! So many interesting moments along the way, great instrumental surprises . . . I actually found this very theatrical in it's presentation, like something you would hear in a musical stage production.

 

On 5/23/2022 at 7:13 AM, Wookiee said:

As noynekker noes this is much more a musical theatre piece, mix sound fair here on my Events.  That lead synths sounds just tad to forward at the 2;18 point woudl be my only observation.

Agree with what both Noynekker and Wookie said   - enjoyed this, thanks for posting

Nigel

 

[DeeringAmps 1,783]

The consensus is 👍's.

👏

t

still waiting for Blood on the Sun

[Johnbee58 335]

@BapuThank you very much, sir.  Means a lot!

@Bajan BlueThanks so much, Nigel!

@DeeringAmpsThanks Tom!

😀John B