David Sprouse 795 Posted May 3 ....is time I made a little video to go along with this 1 minute song. 3 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Wookiee 1,749 Posted May 5 Nice piece, the plucked strings sound a little constrained, perhaps a tad more reverb on them to let them breath a little, but what do i know. 1 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Douglas Kirby 790 Posted May 7 I liked what you have here - but I think it needs further development - I enjoyed it while it lasted, but a bit short in length. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
David Sprouse 795 Posted May 7 1 hour ago, Douglas Kirby said: I liked what you have here - but I think it needs further development - I enjoyed it while it lasted, but a bit short in length. Thank you Douglas! I made it short in order to give the listener back his time. The shorter the piece, the better reviews I get. :D:D Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
David Sprouse 795 Posted May 7 On 5/5/2022 at 1:27 AM, Wookiee said: Nice piece, the plucked strings sound a little constrained, perhaps a tad more reverb on them to let them breath a little, but what do i know. Thanks wookie. The plucked strings are actually an instrument called a wassolou balafon. I drenched it in reverb because of the video, in the cavern. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Wookiee 1,749 Posted May 7 40 minutes ago, David Sprouse said: Thanks wookie. The plucked strings are actually an instrument called a wassolou balafon. I drenched it in reverb because of the video, in the cavern. See I told you what do I know 😎 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Bajan Blue 1,041 Posted May 9 Hi David I eagerly clicked on this thinking you'd done a cover of the Velvet Underground track, but no, something equally as appealing and all your own !! I really enjoyed it, could have been a bit longer but still enjoyed it Thanks Nigel Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
DeeringAmps 1,742 Posted May 9 👍’s! Been working on some “shorts” so I get it… t Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
David Sprouse 795 Posted May 14 On 5/9/2022 at 8:50 AM, Bajan Blue said: Hi David I eagerly clicked on this thinking you'd done a cover of the Velvet Underground track, but no, something equally as appealing and all your own !! I really enjoyed it, could have been a bit longer but still enjoyed it Thanks Nigel Nigel, I listend to the velvet underground's *the gift* . I only wish I could wite such nuanced lyrics. Thank you for finding the time to listen to my ditty. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
David Sprouse 795 Posted May 16 On 5/9/2022 at 9:00 AM, DeeringAmps said: 👍’s! Been working on some “shorts” so I get it… t 🤙 1 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Johnbee58 323 Posted May 17 Looping it would make nice music to relax by. 😀John B Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Hidden Symmetry 1,447 Posted May 17 (edited) I like the motif & minimal but effective use of orchestration. Enjoyed it. Edited May 17 by Hidden Symmetry Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Larry T. 236 Posted May 17 nicely realized soundscape/capture of moments piece....everything you have in the song fits perfectly and compliments the other parts well....enjoyed listening 🎶🦜🦚🎶 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites