ABull 83 Posted May 30, 2019 (edited) oooooooooooooo Edited June 14, 2019 by ABull Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
ABull 83 Posted May 30, 2019 (edited) Hey mates -- thanks for all the listens and comments. Edited June 14, 2019 by ABull Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
thegaltieribrothers 173 Posted May 31, 2019 Hi ABull, Nice play on words and hook with a quirky song to boot. Well performed, thanks for sharing. Good Job! regards paul Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
freddy j 350 Posted May 31, 2019 Hi Allan. This is a really well put together song. It has an excellent pop feel to it. It has a bit of contrast with a bit of a cheery melody with what could be sad lyrics. BTW the lyrics are great! Nice one! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
kakku 102 Posted May 31, 2019 Very catchy which is a sign of a good song Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
amiller 186 Posted May 31, 2019 Nice hook, melody, lyrics and arrangement. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Jesse Screed 303 Posted June 3, 2019 Abull, you are a song smith really nice arrangement lots of real cool elements weaving in and out. this is top notch in the sense that not only does it have your style it is just very well constructed. every song I comment on in the song forum has something that stands out, it could be the emotion, it could be the urgency, it could be individual instrumental talent, or it could be the overall talent. I could tear this song apart and comment on each 8 bars, because there is something going on in each segment. I think everyone should listen very close to this song and notice the nuances. I think this would make a great theme song for a quirky netflix sitcom, you know, a dysfunctional family with separated spouses and the man starts to hit the bottle after he finds out she found someone who tickled her fancy more that he ever could. outstanding! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Douglas Kirby 501 Posted June 3, 2019 It's a cool catchy song - it hooked me - nice job. Sounded like a 60's mix to me - nothing wrong with that. 1 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Johnbee58 227 Posted June 3, 2019 Catchy in title and tune. I love your vocal style and harmonies. 🙂John B Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
ABull 83 Posted June 5, 2019 On 5/31/2019 at 6:16 AM, thegaltieribrothers said: Hi ABull, Nice play on words and hook with a quirky song to boot. Well performed, thanks for sharing. Good Job! regards paul Thanks mate. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
ABull 83 Posted June 7, 2019 On 5/31/2019 at 2:13 PM, freddy j said: Hi Allan. This is a really well put together song. It has an excellent pop feel to it. It has a bit of contrast with a bit of a cheery melody with what could be sad lyrics. BTW the lyrics are great! Nice one! Thanks Freddy -- glad you like the song esp. the lyrics mate. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
kennywtelejazz 1,042 Posted June 9, 2019 You put into words VIA your song how I feel sometimes . The second I walk out my front door it's like a bad dream or a free for all out there . Yeah , I sure hope Mr Together lands on his feet ...same goes for me lol Kenny Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
SPAK 143 Posted June 9, 2019 (edited) Blimey! I'm back in the 60's Great demo and thanks for the post ... loved it ..... Now where's that Watneys Red Barrel ?? Edited June 9, 2019 by SPAK Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
ABull 83 Posted June 9, 2019 On 5/31/2019 at 2:43 PM, kakku said: Very catchy which is a sign of a good song Much thanks mate, but we know that's not always the case, right? Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
kakku 102 Posted June 10, 2019 (edited) 4 hours ago, ABull said: Much thanks mate, but we know that's not always the case, right? You are correct. I often do think so though. Now that you reminded me of that fact i feel much better about many of my tunes. Btw, where did you find that creepy doll face on your avatar Edited June 10, 2019 by kakku Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
kakku 102 Posted June 11, 2019 Hey. I did not mean anything bad with what I said. The doll face is actually cool now that I took a better look Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
