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Hey mates -- thanks for all the listens and comments.

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Hi Allan.  This is a really well put together song.  It has an excellent pop feel to it.  It has a bit of contrast with a bit of a cheery melody with what could be sad lyrics.  BTW the lyrics are great!

Nice one!

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Abull, you are a song smith

really nice arrangement

lots of real cool elements weaving in and out.

this is top notch in the sense that not only does it have your style it is just very well constructed.

every song I comment on in the song forum has something that stands out, it could be the emotion, it could be the urgency, it could be individual instrumental talent, or it could be the overall talent.

I could tear this song apart and comment on each  8 bars, because there is something going on in each segment.

I think everyone should listen very close to this song and notice the nuances.

I think this would make a great theme song for a quirky netflix sitcom, you know, a dysfunctional family with  separated  spouses and the man starts to hit the bottle after he finds out she found someone who tickled her fancy more that he ever could.

outstanding!

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It's a cool catchy song - it hooked me - nice job.  Sounded like a 60's mix to me - nothing wrong with that.

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Catchy in title and tune.  I love your vocal style and harmonies.

🙂John B

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On 5/31/2019 at 6:16 AM, thegaltieribrothers said:

Hi ABull,

Nice play on words and hook with a quirky song to boot.

Well performed, thanks for sharing.

Good Job!

regards

paul

Thanks mate.

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On 5/31/2019 at 2:13 PM, freddy j said:

Hi Allan.  This is a really well put together song.  It has an excellent pop feel to it.  It has a bit of contrast with a bit of a cheery melody with what could be sad lyrics.  BTW the lyrics are great!

Nice one!

Thanks Freddy -- glad you like the song esp. the lyrics mate.

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You put into words VIA your song how I feel sometimes . The second I walk out my front door it's like a bad dream or a free for all out there .

Yeah , I sure hope Mr Together lands on his feet ...same goes for me lol

 

Kenny

 

 

 

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Posted (edited)

Blimey! I'm back in the 60's Great demo and thanks for the post ... loved it ..... Now where's that Watneys Red Barrel ??

 

 

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On 5/31/2019 at 2:43 PM, kakku said:

Very catchy which is a sign of a good song

Much thanks mate, but we know that's not always the case, right?

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4 hours ago, ABull said:

Much thanks mate, but we know that's not always the case, right?

You are correct. I often do think so though. Now that you reminded me of that fact i feel much better about many of my tunes. Btw, where did you find that creepy doll face on your avatar

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Hey. I did not mean anything bad with what I said. The doll face is actually cool now that I took a better look

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