thegaltieribrothers 226 Posted January 24 Hi there fellow CbB's, please find a link to my latest offering to the court of popular debate i still have eyes if you have time, have a listen + any comments would be greatly appreciated. thank you for all you previous advice and support. best wishes paul 1 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
STEVE POOLE 264 Posted January 24 Great lyrics. Think you should address the unison of the vocal work in places. Nice song and I love the chorus. ATB Steve 1 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
jack c. 713 Posted January 24 real nice song feel.well done.jack c.sing the verse again to make it double more full. 1 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
antler 1,387 Posted January 24 Great song, with some nice vocal harmonies too. Well done. 1 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
thegaltieribrothers 226 Posted January 26 Hi Steve, Thanks for the comments and the suggestion for improving the vocals. Hi Jack, Thanks for listening and commenting, glad you like the song. Thank you both for listening and commenting it means a lot. best wishes paul Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Douglas Kirby 791 Posted January 27 I get a bit of a retro vibe on this one - but the mix sounds modern. Nice job on the lyrics - I thought the chorus was a good hook, and I really liked the bridge. 1 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
bjornpdx 1,031 Posted January 28 Paul, good lyrics, good story. The accompaniment could use more work I think. Just seems like it meanders a bit. Also, the percussion sounds like a click track to me so maybe more attention there as well. Anyway, just one man's opinion. -Bjorn 1 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
David Sprouse 801 Posted January 29 Reminds me of *the association* from the 60's. as everyone said, lyrics are stellar and I love the melody. great song! 1 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Wookiee 1,789 Posted January 31 That was nice tune to tap the furry paw to whilst dealing with other things, like email. 1 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Bajan Blue 1,100 Posted January 31 Nice track - echo some of the comments re the accompaniment meandering a little at times, but other wise all good and a good mix Nigel 1 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Lynn Wilson 643 Posted February 1 Well done, gentlemen! Your writing and production keeps getting better, and I always look forward to hearing your songs. If anything, I think the vocals could be a tad tighter in pitch, but not time. Otherwise, this is a gem and a fun listen! 1 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
thegaltieribrothers 226 Posted February 3 Hi Antler, Glad you liked the harmonies, thanks for listening and commenting. best wishes paul Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
noynekker 379 Posted February 4 Fun and catchy tune ! . . . kind if reminds me of The Proclaimers, a great Scottish band, but this sounds more English ? The intro really caught my attention, what a great start . . . then later in the song the sound got very full, you got those vocals right out front, and they sound really great and authentic . . . such a great listen guys. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
freddy j 624 Posted February 6 Your song lyrics are always packed with emotion and the melody on this song really carries the emotions along. The lyrics and melody are also very catchy. It was a treat to listen to this! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
thegaltieribrothers 226 Posted February 8 Hi Douglas, Glad you liked the retro vibe and the bridge, thanks for listening and commenting. Hi Bjorn, Thanks for your comments on the accompaniment and the percussion I will take these into consideration on my next pass. Hi David, Glad you liked the lyrics and melody. Thank you all for listening and commenting, it means a lot. best wishes paul Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
thegaltieribrothers 226 Posted February 11 Hi Wookie, Glad to be of musical assistance while you do your correspondence 😉 Hi Nigel, Glad you liked the track, thanks for listening. Hi Lynn, We'll work on the vocals more in future, thanks for the comments. Thank you all for listening and commenting, it means a lot. best wishes paul Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
thegaltieribrothers 226 Posted February 14 Hi Noynekker, An english Proclaimers, that'll do for me! Hi Freddy, Glad you liked the song. Thank you both for listening and commenting, it means a lot. best wishes paul Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
PhonoBrainer 1,867 Posted February 15 (edited) Overall I liked it a lot, but I couldn't help thinking that you have given yourself, or anyone really, a fair mouthful to sing. You could polish and in spots tune the vocals, it will sound great and be a good song indeed! But there's a lot of words going into measures with a midtempo feel, and I was thinking to myself, dang I'm not sure if I'd want to sing this! A tough ask, lotta words, and you actually do a very decent job! In the second half the rhythm guitar comes is and picks up the drive nicely, very cool add there. It's a bit of a depeche/tears for fears vocal on top of a older Irish feeling song. cheers, -Tom Edited February 15 by PhonoBrainer Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
thegaltieribrothers 226 Posted February 22 Hi Tom, The lyrics are a bit wordy but to be fair it was one of my earlier songs. Thanks for listening and commenting, it means a lot. best wishes paul Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
