Supa Reels Posted December 21, 2021 Share Posted December 21, 2021 6 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KSband Posted December 21, 2021 Share Posted December 21, 2021 Enjoyed that, very moody groove. Reminds me of Peter Gabriel stuff. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jack c. Posted December 22, 2021 Share Posted December 22, 2021 sounds billy joel and it sounds good.jack c. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wookiee Posted December 23, 2021 Share Posted December 23, 2021 Sad and soulful but it ends a bit abrupt. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kevin Walsh Posted December 23, 2021 Share Posted December 23, 2021 Agree with the Peter Gabriel comment. Lovely melody and arrangement. Everything's nice and clear, particularly the vocals which sound great. To my ear the vocals might be pulled back a bit to let the blend with the instruments but it works the way you have it too. This is good stuff! 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Supa Reels Posted December 24, 2021 Author Share Posted December 24, 2021 22 hours ago, Wookiee said: Sad and soulful but it ends a bit abrupt. A bit like your comment LOL ...dead right though, 'cause for some reason, best know to SC my last few milliseconds have been sent to the cosmos ... maybe to be found in your trip through the universe in your stuff .. Have a good one 🤝 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wookiee Posted December 24, 2021 Share Posted December 24, 2021 4 minutes ago, SupaReels said: A bit like your comment True, but you have not had my last 6 weeks. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Supa Reels Posted December 24, 2021 Author Share Posted December 24, 2021 Just now, Wookiee said: True, but you have not had my last 6 weeks. Where are you old friend ... it's Xmas day tomorrow so not a lot of time to get back on earth 👽 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wookiee Posted December 24, 2021 Share Posted December 24, 2021 3 hours ago, SupaReels said: Where are you old friend You know that effluent filled creek you hear people talk about? 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lynn Wilson Posted December 24, 2021 Share Posted December 24, 2021 Steve, this has always been one of my favorite songs of yours. It gets better every time I hear it! Have a merry Christmas and happy new year! 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Supa Reels Posted December 24, 2021 Author Share Posted December 24, 2021 17 minutes ago, Lynn Wilson said: Steve, this has always been one of my favorite songs of yours. It gets better every time I hear it! Have a merry Christmas and happy new year! And the very same to you Lynn, and your family ... Keep well and stay safe Best wishes Steve 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
David Sprouse Posted December 25, 2021 Share Posted December 25, 2021 It's been awhile since I've been in love, it's probably why my songwriting is suffering. Great song about a universal subject. As usual your lyrics are stellar. I thought the ending was ok, the suddenness being like a question mark at the end. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Supa Reels Posted December 26, 2021 Author Share Posted December 26, 2021 16 hours ago, David Sprouse said: It's been awhile since I've been in love, it's probably why my songwriting is suffering. Great song about a universal subject. As usual your lyrics are stellar. I thought the ending was ok, the suddenness being like a question mark at the end. Thankyou David, not too sure that your songwriting is suffering as I always enjoy the trip Stay safe Steve Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Larry T. Posted December 27, 2021 Share Posted December 27, 2021 well done, vocals, playing, arrangement, production, mix.... 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bjornpdx Posted December 28, 2021 Share Posted December 28, 2021 I feel like I'm repeating myself here Steve but you really do get the emotion across in your music. Just listening closely I can pick out all the little things in the background that contribute to that emotion coming out. Very well done. -Bjorn 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tim Smith Posted December 28, 2021 Share Posted December 28, 2021 The video matches the music production very well. Lyrics and music are excellent. The only small nit I have the the string plucks seem a bit over done to my ears. Granted I had to be listening for them in the mix since they are low. I could see bringing them out in only certain places. Overall not a deal breaker for this. Excellent work! -Tim Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PhonoBrainer Posted December 28, 2021 Share Posted December 28, 2021 That's a great vocal, mellow yet emotional. Good work on this one! For me, watching a bunch of millennials in photo-romantic torture got a bit samey if not downright ridiculous, but that is 100% my age showing. I also found the string plucks cool but occasionally I wondered if they were being doubled, or were not in sync all the time? Might be worth a check . . . The Peter Gabriel comparison is apt but you have your own thing going fer sure. cheers, -Tom 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Supa Reels Posted December 29, 2021 Author Share Posted December 29, 2021 On 12/27/2021 at 4:33 PM, Larry T. said: well done, vocals, playing, arrangement, production, mix.... Thanks for listening Larry your comments mean a lot ATB Steve Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Supa Reels Posted December 29, 2021 Author Share Posted December 29, 2021 On 12/28/2021 at 7:10 AM, bjornpdx said: I feel like I'm repeating myself here Steve but you really do get the emotion across in your music. Just listening closely I can pick out all the little things in the background that contribute to that emotion coming out. Very well done. -Bjorn We all thank each other for listening but there's something special in your comment that means so much.. thankyou for listening. Stay well Steve Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Supa Reels Posted December 29, 2021 Author Share Posted December 29, 2021 18 hours ago, PhonoBrainer said: That's a great vocal, mellow yet emotional. Good work on this one! For me, watching a bunch of millennials in photo-romantic torture got a bit samey if not downright ridiculous, but that is 100% my age showing. I also found the string plucks cool but occasionally I wondered if they were being doubled, or were not in sync all the time? Might be worth a check . . . The Peter Gabriel comparison is apt but you have your own thing going fer sure. cheers, -Tom 23 hours ago, Tim Smith said: The video matches the music production very well. Lyrics and music are excellent. The only small nit I have the the string plucks seem a bit over done to my ears. Granted I had to be listening for them in the mix since they are low. I could see bringing them out in only certain places. Overall not a deal breaker for this. Excellent work! -Tim Hi Tom, Your comments are well taken and I feel I could have done so much better. What I attempted, was to give a dual perspective on the whole song. In that I wanted the message to appeal both to the mail and female in broken relationships. I was limited on media and came up with this vid. I will check the strings as I now have the Spitfire BBC plug so I might do it again .. BTW I love your comment on a bit samey if not downright ridiculous, but that is 100% my age showing .. danno how old you are but it don't matter as I agree @ 70 but as said I had a limited media. Thanks so much for your detailed comments Steve _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Hi Tim Thankyou for your obs as said in my comment to Tom, I need to check those strings again. I think given the overall feedback it's something worth redoing, Thanks for the praise mate / Not lost here ATB Steve _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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