Soul To Soul Bomp Bomp Chop

[jack c. 710]

 

[Bapu 4,891]

Needs some build up of additional instruments added along the way to increase interest IMO. Changeups were nice but took way to long to get there.

[jack c. 710]

6 hours ago, Bapu said:

Needs some build up of additional instruments

thanks for listen/comments.jack c.

[PhonoBrainer 1,819]

I could hear a little Robin Trower influence in the vocals? Or maybe Fred Frith?  I could hear a full stop gospel choir in call-and-response. Very cool groove all the way through. I agree there's more meat to hang on these fine bones somehow. All set for it.

Mix wise it sounds like you have added an eq bump for air, to the hi-hats/cymbals, and it might be worth pulling it back a bit. ?

Very solid groove, sir.

 

[Boomin36Beatz 55]

the melody reminds me on an old Bruce Lee Kung Fu movie.

Like it.

All the Best

Drama Baba Beats

[bjornpdx 1,005]

Took a little too long to get to the main verse and there's a lot of measures where nothing happens. Otherwise, promising song.
You're really prolific. Are these songs you've put aside for a while and now finishing up?
-Bjorn

[Makke 300]

Cool! Enjoyable  groove through the song. sounds nice.

In my opinion more chord changes here and there could fit well.

[jack c. 710]

15 hours ago, PhonoBrainer said:

Robin Trower influence in the vocals? Or maybe Fred Frith? 

thanks for listen/comments.i don't know those guys.jack c.

[jack c. 710]

2 hours ago, Makke said:

In my opinion more chord changes here and there could fit well.

thanks for listen/comments.jack c.

[jack c. 710]

15 hours ago, Boomin36Beatz said:

the melody reminds me on an old Bruce Lee Kung Fu movie.

thanks for listen/comments.inspired by mr. brown.jack c.

[jack c. 710]

13 hours ago, bjornpdx said:

You're really prolific. Are these songs you've put aside for a while and now finishing up?

mr. brown inspired.thanks for compliment.for decades i longed to record music so now all of me songs are just written and recorded by what i see,hear,think of,and lots from me life experiences. jack c.

[mark skinner 647]

I loved that driving funk groove. Several places a key change would be nice.   All midi ?    Enjoyed it ..  mark

[jack c. 710]

4 hours ago, mark skinner said:

All midi ?

i played funky chords on me carvin guitar.thanks for listen/comments.jack c.

[Kevin Walsh 214]

I agree with what's been said with the exception of one thing: soul to soul bomp bomp chop!

Edited November 14, 2021 by Kevin Walsh

[daryl1968 442]

Definitely cut to the vocal earlier cos wants it gets going, it's a great groove and melody. 

[jack c. 710]

17 hours ago, Kevin Walsh said:

I agree with what's been said with the exception of one thing: soul to soul bomp bomp chop!

Definitely cut to the vocal earlier cos wants it gets going, it's a great groove and melody. 

thanks mates.jack c.

[Douglas Kirby 790]

This is a cool groove and melody - the length seems to indicate that it's an album cut - nothing wrong with that.  I liked your vocal on this one.

I agree with what was mentioned above - it could use some changes coming in earlier.

I listened through headphones on my laptop - the volume is really low - not sure what your levels are on mix-down.

Your stuff is always interesting to listen to.

[jack c. 710]

16 hours ago, Douglas Kirby said:

your stuff is always interesting to listen to.

thanks mate.jack c.