Jesse Screed 582 Posted September 30, 2021 https://www.soundclick.com/music/songInfo.cfm?songID=14320735 any suggestions? 1 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
PhonoBrainer 1,778 Posted October 1, 2021 well if you are asking, maybe pull the scrap metal off of the vocals, stand the vocals up, dust them off, let them have their say. I liked it otherwise but it's a bit cacophonous of course. Poor chap is giving us pearls without being properly intelligible. just my .02 pineapples. cheers, -Tom Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
jack c. 672 Posted October 1, 2021 your stuff is so off the wall/complicated it's amazing not hit bullet in the charts but to me interesting.don't change anything maybe bring up voice.jack c. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Bapu 4,650 Posted October 1, 2021 17 hours ago, Jesse Screed said: https://www.soundclick.com/music/songInfo.cfm?songID=14320735 any suggestions? More cowbell? 1 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Lynn Wilson 641 Posted October 1, 2021 I like it as is! Good arrangement. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Jesse Screed 582 Posted October 2, 2021 21 hours ago, PhonoBrainer said: well if you are asking, maybe pull the scrap metal off of the vocals, stand the vocals up, dust them off, let them have their say. I liked it otherwise but it's a bit cacophonous of course. Poor chap is giving us pearls without being properly intelligible. just my .02 pineapples. cheers, -Tom Tom, I agree 100%. I tried a few new recording techniques on this and didn't take the time to refine it so the vocals are definitely lost, and intelligible. 20 hours ago, jack c. said: your stuff is so off the wall/complicated it's amazing not hit bullet in the charts but to me interesting.don't change anything maybe bring up voice.jack c. jack, I appreciate the comments. yes, it is off the wall, with that I concur. 19 hours ago, Bapu said: More cowbell? I lent my cowbell out to the local dairy farm. She had misplaced hers, and her pampered cows were producing spoiled milk. I'm not sure she'll return it as it saved her farm from udder disaster. 15 hours ago, Lynn Wilson said: I like it as is! Good arrangement. You my friend, have keen sense of quality! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites