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Hi Jack - the sound (i think it is rain?) that is there from the start until about 1.57,  I really think is too loud - distracts from your vocals

Other than that Good start

Nigel

 

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6 hours ago, Bajan Blue said:

Hi Jack - the sound (i think it is rain?)

yes .that's for listen/comments.jack c.

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The Rain is to much by all means use it but do not let it obscure the important bits.

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A tone poem with some cool instrumentation. Agreed that the rain could back off, particularly during the vocals. I feel like the rain is decreased a bit as some of the instrumentation comes in? Then suddenly out completely, then back for 3 seconds with parrots. A bit confusing! But as this is part 1 of something, maybe the answers come later.

In any event, I hope those lyrics come back repeated for meaning, as they sounded kind of important!

interested,

-Tom

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8 hours ago, Wookiee said:

The Rain is to much by all means use it but do not let it obscure the important bits.

 

3 hours ago, PhonoBrainer said:

A tone poem with some cool instrumentation.

thanks mates for listen/comments.jack c.

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