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Hi. Started this with reaper then improved it on Bandlab. Pop dance style

 

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Nice! I listened to it pretty loud - those are some great synths!

One idea - when it's loud, the synths are very bright in the mix, and the  lower drums like kick and snare seem very pale. I don't know what you are using for monitors, but I think the shine is tilted towards the upper range.

Do you have a filter? In your intro you could filter in the kick drum. Just another thought.

The outtro groove is really extra catchy!!!

cheers!

-Tom

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Nice tune.  🙂
Synth sound too bright for me on my monitors but playing is nice.
Bring down the bass a little bit more??

Reminds me of one of those songs that you used to hear when you went to Spain on holiday.  🙂
Maybe its just me…  but has an 80's vibe to it.

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12 hours ago, emeraldsoul said:

Nice! I listened to it pretty loud - those are some great synths!

One idea - when it's loud, the synths are very bright in the mix, and the  lower drums like kick and snare seem very pale. I don't know what you are using for monitors, but I think the shine is tilted towards the upper range.

Do you have a filter? In your intro you could filter in the kick drum. Just another thought.

The outtro groove is really extra catchy!!!

cheers!

-Tom

Thanks. I use headphones for mixing. Good tips. Maybe I will return to it later to improve it

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12 hours ago, edd987 said:

Sounds really good! Nice clear mix.  :)

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On 4/6/2019 at 11:21 AM, garybrun said:

Nice tune.  🙂
Synth sound too bright for me on my monitors but playing is nice.
Bring down the bass a little bit more??

Reminds me of one of those songs that you used to hear when you went to Spain on holiday.  🙂
Maybe its just me…  but has an 80's vibe to it.

Thanks. Maybe I mix it better later. Bass should always be played loud although it could be a bit less loud in this tune

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3 hours ago, thegaltieribrothers said:

Hi kakku,

Very lively bright tune with great synth riffs.

Thanks for sharing.

Good Job!

regards

paul

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47 minutes ago, Douglas Kirby said:

This arrangement worked well - very catchy - the mix sounded excellent. The overall vibe is positive - I liked it.

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Hi, Kakku,

It's really great to see you on the new forum and to hear a new song from you!😀

This is a great sounding piece of dance electronica, with excellent synth work and composition, great playing and lots of cool melodies!

The modern sounding mix sounds clean, wide and punchy, and I could easily imagine hearing this being played in a dance club in any big city.

Excellent work, my friend, very cool song!👍

Best wishes,
Bob

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1 hour ago, Bob Oister said:

Hi, Kakku,

It's really great to see you on the new forum and to hear a new song from you!😀

This is a great sounding piece of dance electronica, with excellent synth work and composition, great playing and lots of cool melodies!

The modern sounding mix sounds clean, wide and punchy, and I could easily imagine hearing this being played in a dance club in any big city.

Excellent work, my friend, very cool song!👍

Best wishes,
Bob

Thanks Bob. You are too kind

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I missed this one, but I finally caught up.  This is very bright, poppy, and happy sounding as dance songs go.  I'd like to hear this played over some large speakers and subs, like in a club.  I'll bet people wouldn't be able to stay off the dance floor.

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56 minutes ago, Lynn said:

I missed this one, but I finally caught up.  This is very bright, poppy, and happy sounding as dance songs go.  I'd like to hear this played over some large speakers and subs, like in a club.  I'll bet people wouldn't be able to stay off the dance floor.

Thanks Lynn. Many say that my tunes are happy, but I think they are often melancholic in nature

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